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Writing out of Hell: The Practice of William Carlos Williams and the opening of the Field
Paul Nelson
Lesley University
January, 2005

Writing out of Hell:

The Practice of William Carlos Williams and the Opening of the Field

 

In the summer of 1957 William Carlos Williams wrote a piece for The American Scholar called “Faiths for a Complex World.” In it he said “My life is a constant watching of the field.” It had been his daily business, according to Paul Mariani. He scanned “every newspaper, every journal, every letter for hints as to what was going on in the world of events” (Mariani 732).

 

By 1957, his medical practice was curtailed by health issues, but the spontaneous writing style he developed out of necessity, was firmly entrenched. He articulated this as early as 1923 in “Spring and All” when he said: “Most of my life has been lived in hell, a hell of repression lit by flashes of inspiration when a poem such as this or that would appear” (Williams CP 203).

 

The 1950 publication of Charles Olson’s seminal essay “Projective Verse” gave Williams (and Ezra Pound) credit for being the only American poets writing from an open stance. Olson also called this stance toward poem-making “composition by field” and Robert Duncan was to follow shortly with The Opening of the Field by 1960.

 

Williams was there first. The field as applied to poetry was Williams’ life-long concern, though he said he was looking for a new measure, which, as Mariani suggestedtook on the dimensions of myth with him” (Mariani 438). His obsession with the need to reinvent line is best summarized in Paterson:

Without invention nothing is well spaced,

unless the mind change, unless

the stars are new measured, according

to their relative positions, the

line will not change, the necessity

will not matriculate:  unless there is

a new mind there cannot be a new

line, the old will go on

repeating itself with recurring

deadliness:  without invention

nothing lies under the witch-hazel

bush, the alder does not grow from among

the hummocks margining the all

but spent channels of the old swale,

the small foot-prints

of mice under the overhanging

tufts of the bunch-grass will not

appear:  without invention the line

will never again take on its ancient

divisions when the word, a supple word,

lived in it, crumbled now to chalk             (P 65).

 

            Williams in 1938, by age 55, was intent on innovating and knew that Einstein’s advances in science (Relativity Theory), had implications for the new measure as well as for society and consciousness in general, as evidenced by the just-cited passage. The “variable foot” was Williams’ awkward attempt to name this method for breaking away from the inherited line and meter of European poetic forms and craft a way of structuring the poetic line based on the realities of life on the North American continent. The notion of referring to his efforts as a field came not too much later. As early as October 26, 1943, in a talk given at the New York Public Library, Williams stated that the war was the first and only thing in the world today” and that poetry was not an escape from that reality but a “different sector of the field” (Mariani 483).

 

            So what we see as we look back at Williams, besides the well-documented localism and the insistence on the American vernacular, are two other crucial aspects of his work rarely noticed: the notion of a spontaneous composing process and attention to structure utilizing the notion of the field.

 

Spontaneous Composition

Williams, perhaps out of necessity, developed a spontaneous writing style. He was a very busy doctor, delivering thousands of babies. You can imagine a patient in the waiting room while Williams gets a hit of inspiration and jots down this quick poem on the back of a prescription pad. After a couple of decades of doing this, the process is – if not perfected – at least polished to a certain degree. He taught himself how to recognize that poem welling up, perhaps with a starting phrase or image. He learned to trust that hit and go with it. The key is in the process with which he was creating – in the moment – the form and content. He was not as dedicated to that original take as Olson would be, but a harvesting of that quick burst is what Williams’ process was about. His escape from hell was undoubtedly that heightened state of consciousness the act of composing spontaneously gave him, which is why I have likened this to a hit. Certainly this escape was a respite from poor, sick patients, but more than that, it was reality heightened into a different, deeper state of consciousness that becomes addictive in the most positive sense of that word.

The Field

In the 1830s British scientist Michael Faraday began a series of experiments that would lead to 20th century field theory. Faraday first realized the importance of a field as a physical object, during his investigations into magnetism. He realized that electric and magnetic fields are not only fields of force which dictate the motion of particles, but also have independent physical reality because they carry energy. In physics, a field is an assignment of a quantity to every point in space. Other work in field theory has Rupert Sheldrake proposing morphogenetic (or morphic) field theory, a hypothetical biological (and potentially social) equivalent to an electromagnetic field that operates to shape the exact form of a living thing, and may also shape its behavior and coordination with other beings. Sheldrake takes his notions from his background in biology and points out that this refers to “the coming into being of form (from the Greek morphe = form + genesis = coming into being”) (Sheldrake 275). In fact, Sheldrake suggests, “Matter is no longer the fundamental reality, as it was for old-style materialism. Fields and energy are now more fundamental than matter. The ultimate particles of matter have become vibrations of energy within fields” (Sheldrake 4). David Hawkins has also contributed some interesting theories regarding fields of dominance. Hawkins calls them “attractor fields” (Hawkins 9) and gives us more validation for the power of composition by field. He says “Genius … seems to proceed from sudden revelation rather than conceptualization, but there is an unseen process involved. Although the genius’s mind may appear stalled, frustrated with the problem, what it is really doing is preparing the field (my emphasis). “There is a struggle with reason which leads, like a Zen Koan, to a rational impasse from which the only way forward is by a leap from a lower to a higher attractor energy pattern” (Hawkins 164). This may be described as a deepening of consciousness. Developing the courage to trust what looks non-linear puts the practitioner at the level of integrity, in Hawkins’ Map of Consciousness (Hawkins 52). In the introduction to The Wedge published in 1944, Williams put it this way “…each speech having its own character the poetry it engenders will be peculiar to that speech also in its own intrinsic form.”  (CLP 4).

 

Williams sensed on some level that his act of writing, in opposition to the war, and the impulse toward it, was larger than the idle rambling of a left-wing poet. He was working in a different sector of the same field and his work was creating its own field of resonance that would have an impact, and still does. One fine example of that is the poem “In Chains”:

            When blackguards and murderers

            undercover of those offices

            accuse the world of those villainies

            which they themselves invent to

            torture us – we have no choice

            but to bend to their designs,

            buck them or be trampled while

            our thoughts gnaw, snap and bite

            within us helplessly – unless

            we learn from that to avoid

            being as they are, how love

            will rise out of its ashes if

            we water it, tie up the slender

            stem and keep the image of its

            lively flower chiseled upon our minds.        (CLP 19)

           

Is it the linear notion of cause and effect Williams was hoping for, that is by writing a poem he could end a war? I doubt it. He was quite frustrated by the impulse of the academies, so I am sure he did not feel a poem was going to change the mind of the “scholars of war,” as his protégé Allen Ginsberg called them in his poem “Howl.” I am suggesting he had an understanding that his work had resonance beyond the immediate, first by suggesting that those who react by hating the war makers become no better than them and have lost. Those readers who are capable of comprehending this can act in accordance with the notion that to end war one must stop thinking with hate, or in the false “us versus them” mode.

 

Williams was prescient if you value Hawkins view that fields “dominate human existence and therefore define content, meaning and value, and serve as organizing energies for widespread patterns of human behavior” (Hawkins 9). Certainly the Whiteheadian notion of events being influenced by past events and influencing future events reinforces this notion of the power of the poem as field, suggesting that the process-orientation of this kind of composition taps into powerful energy (in one sense) outside of the poet. How appropriate is the poem “In Chains” considering the acts of the Bush Administration and the systematic torture of prisoners at Abu Ghraib prison, Guantanamo, and at secret military bases around the world?

In addition to his lifelong, perhaps mythic quest for this new measure, Williams also had an obsessive contempt for the work of T.S. Eliot, especially his influential poem “The Waste Land.” Among other things, Williams felt the release of the poem “…wiped out our world as if an atom bomb had been dropped upon it,” and that “Eliot had turned his back on reviving my world,” away from a new art form “rooted in the locality which should give it fruit” (AB 174). In an 2004 interview with Tibetan Dur Bon Master Physician Christopher Hansard, he said of Eliot: “Eliot wrote out of unconstrained fear. He always sought an outcome.”[1] It was Eliot’s energetic field exuding fear to which Williams and later Olson were reacting. In fact, Olson’s “The Kingfishers” was a deliberate effort to repugn the hopelessness of “The Waste Land.”

           

Yet “The Waste Land” was, and in many circles continues to be, an important poem. James Breslin in his critical essay on Williams and the Whitman tradition says that

according to Williams,

mental activity in most people is conducted primarily at the level of ordinary consciousness or the ego. The distinctive feature of such life is its tendency toward a rigid conservatism, a fear of new experience, and a desire to operate safely and fixedly within established categories. Locked within a system, cut off from fresh experience by the desire for security, the ordinary man will be emotionally and sensually starved; in a real sense, he will not even exist…Ironically then, the person who seeks security uproots himself from the present moment, the only thing that IS, and so he becomes a perpetual drifter. Because he is impoverished, his activity will be incessant; but because he is dissociated from the sources of life, his restless activity will be futile…his fear of the new, thwarting the creative process of renewal, is self-destructive(Breslin 158).

           

If that does not peg the state of the modern, TV-fed, terrorized American consumer, I am not sure what can. After all, North America is a continent made up of people escaping something. The spin we have been given is that of religious freedom and opportunity, and there is a kernel of truth in that. The truth is, in America, diversions from introspection have been perfected. Drugs (licit and illicit), gambling, sex, materialism, the list is endless. In contrast Williams’ spontaneous composing process, practiced in snatches of time between patients, and perfected in his later works such as “The Desert Music,” and “Asphodel, That Greeny Flower,” was one of constant renewal. Breslin suggests constant renewal (the process), was the theme of Williams’ work after 1913, as Williams began to internalize the work of Whitman and extend it. Add to that the notion honed in the Imagist movement that it was the sensual, not the abstract that mattered, a process poetics grounded in the phenomenological moment, and you have the main reasons Williams best work is timeless. This is what happens when you have “a poetics that are alive and conscious” in Michael McClure’s words (xv), combined with a content of renewal and appreciation of the here and now. The field which it radiates is one of a deep consciousness and invention, a quest to make things new “not by transcendence but by immersion” (Breslin 620).

           

Later in life Williams was able to get vindication for his stance toward art from the Action Painting of the Abstract Expressionists, from Charles Olson, and from Allen Ginsberg and the Beat poets, and increasingly, the academy, but the best vindication comes from creating a field of work that will continue to grow in radiance and inspire future generations of poets and readers. And if he is in hell, his poem “Asphodel, That Greeny Flower” suggests that hell at least has its scenery:

                        I was cheered

                                         when I came first to know

            that there were flowers also

                             in hell.                                   (PFB 153)

 

 

 

 

 

WORKS CITED:

Breslin, James.  “William Carlos Williams and the Whitman Tradition.”  Literary Criticism

and Historical Understanding: Selected Papers from the English Institute,  Ed. Philip       Damon.    New York:  Columbia University Press,  1967,    (51-179).

 

Breslin, James.   “Whitman and the Early Development of William Carlos Williams.” 

PMLA 82.7 (Dec. 1967). 613-621.

 

Hansard, Christopher. Personal Interview, July, 2004.  

 

Hawkins, David    Power Vs. Force.  Sedona, AZ:  Veritas, 2004.

 

Mariani, Paul.  William Carlos Williams: A New World Naked.  New York: McGraw-

Hill,  1981.

 

McClure, Michael.   Three Poems   New York: Penguin,   1995

 

Sheldrake, Rupert.  The Sense of Being Stared At.   New York:  Crown,   2003.

 

Williams, William Carlos.   The Autobiography of William Carlos Williams. (AB)  New

York: New Directions, 1967.

 

Willams,  William Carlos.  Collected Poems, Volume I, 1909-1939  (CP)   New

York:  New Directions,    1986.

 

Willams,  William Carlos.  Collected Later Poems Revised Ed.  (CLP)  New York:  New

Directions, 1963   

 

Williams, William Carlos.  Paterson. (P)  New York:  New Directions, 1963.

 

Williams, William Carlos.  Pictures from Brueghel. (PFB).  New York:  New Directions, 

1962.  

 



[1] From a 2003 interview conducted by the author. (See also The Tibetan View of Sound… essay.)