Paul Nelson
November, 2004
The Tibetan Bon view of Sound, Open
Form Poetics and Whitman’s Poetry of Parturition
On the Summer
Solstice 2002 I met a man described in his press materials as a Lha Khu, or Thunderbeing
in the Tibetan Bon Tradition, a person who reincarnates every 700 years to be
the embodiment of medicine. The occasion was an interview for a radio program I
was doing on the book The Tibetan Art of
Living. Since then I have had the
opportunity to experience Dr. Christopher Hansard in a workshop setting several
times and have come to practice some of the consciousness-deepening modalities
of the Tibetan Bon tradition, one that pre-dates Buddhism in
In July of 2004 I was able to get some time with him, between workshops, to discuss some of the topics brought up in his second book The Tibetan Art of Positive Thinking[1] and the subject of sound and open form or field poetry also came up:
CH - All sound is
sacred. It depends on how you recognize it and then what you do with it. So
therefore how you apply that sound or understand what is within that sound, you
then begin to use, because sound is the body of light. Sound is actually a
vibration of light. As your physical body is an expression of the energy
generated by your brain, so is sound an expression of light.
PN – You mention, in the book, an
exercise to amplify the power of your brain.
CH – The brain
itself is full of light, according to the Bon tradition and impulses of energy
that rush through your body and it’s from your brain that you get great energy
that generates life force. There are many Tibetan Bon methods of actually
training the brain to generate a higher resonance, a higher frequency, a bigger
field of energy. Your brain resonates in the Western musical (system) as a G
Major, but you can actually change it and get it to resonate at a different
level, here it emanates a different kind of sound. Your brain is actually a
generator. And it receives and gives out. You can actually get your brain to
store more light and as you store more light, you store more sound.
PN – Is there a tool by which you
can measure levels of consciousness?
CH – Yes, it’s called your heart.
PN - How is that quantified for
someone else to recognize?
CH - By how good you feel about
yourself.
PN – That’s a difficult one isn’t
it?
CH – No.
If you feel truly good, you feel good, and there’s no other feeling.
PN – Someone can’t read that from a
paper, do you think?
CH – Yes they can.
PN – Can you give
an example?
CH – Leaves of Grass by Walt Whitman.
PN – As opposed to
T.S. Eliot’s The
CH
– Absolutely.
PN – Why?
CH – Because T.S. Eliot
wrote out of unconstrained fear. He always sought an outcome. And Walt Whitman
discovered that words, although seemingly the adventure, were in fact the
instruments by which he discovered himself.
PN – “I sing
myself and therefore what I assume you shall assume.”
CH
– Absolutely.
PN – Right, right right, so some of the field poetry of post-World War Two American
poetics talk about the opening of the field (which) was Robert Duncan’s book.
CH
–Absolutely.
PN – So this
energy is greater than, can be quantified as having more energy than something
by Tate or Ransom or these kinds of folks?
CH –Yes,
absolutely.
PN – How would
you… [define that]?
CH – Because all
people in their deepest beings are like that type of poetry. [Duncan, Whitman,
Open Form poets.]
PN – Meaning…?
CH – That when you
look at Walt Whitman for example, all people wish to be in that way.
PN – That way
being in touch with the universal oneness of all things?
CH
– Yes.
PN
– Yeah. And that stream of poetry that is taught in the academy by and
large, the New Criticism, the Donald Hall…
CH – I think you
can relate that to the kinds of developments in psychology and psychotherapy
and misinformation that Freud created. In the same way, it’s a
poetry of doubt and fear. It’s a poetry of
empirical doubt, and it’s the kind of poetry that likes to put things in a box
because you can.
PN – Is it a poetry of pathologizing rather
than mythologizing?
CH – No, it’s a poetry of forensics. There’s nothing wrong with that if
you’re in a court case, but the fact is that you are actually a human being
living a life that is too big and too small to be defined clearly.
PN – Can you talk
to us about body wisdom and breath is the key to accessing it…in the written
word?
CH
– Yes.
PN – And how does
one get that somatic…
CH
– By speaking it.
PN – You fucker. (Loud laughs.) Alright, I quit.
At this point the interview ended
and we sat on the deck of the house on this
“The
body is the soul. The
intelligent body” (11).
So what do Walt
Whitman, the Tibetan Bon tradition and Michael McClure have in common? They are
all integral components of my process of making sense out of why I chose to
incarnate in this body at this time on this planet. All three are part of what
McClure has called a systemless system. In my case, it’s an effort to
make meaning out of experience as Whitman and McClure have done, with words. I
have had the most profound experiences of my life with McClure’s poetry and
with Tibetan Bon healing modalities.
My experience with
McClure began in 1995, when the book Three
Poems crossed my desk, as many review copies do. Something about it made me
want to interview him. I had met and interviewed Allen Ginsberg the year before
and at that time vaguely knew McClure had a connection to Allen. My intuition
was working that day. I read the book, some of it during a backpacking trip in
the Olympic National Park and some of that in an intense grief ritual conducted
at 5,000 feet. After backpacking, I conducted the interview and went out to
lunch with Michael at a Vietnamese restaurant, “courtesy of Penguin Poets,” Michael
said. Since then I have been on a quest to understand why McClure’s poetry has
such resonance for me. He tipped me off to “Projective Verse” on that October
day and suggested I read it aloud. Yet, who else claims to write in “Projective
Verse” as McClure does? In my nine year investigation I have found few that
claim to do so, yet many who are organically using parts of that suggestion.
Michael has told me it was a suggestion
by Olson, though written in a manner that pays homage to Ezra Pound’s bombastic
style.
In “Projective
Verse,” Olson suggests the opposite of what Dr. Hansard called “the poetry of
doubt and fear,” the need to seek an
outcome. Olson says:
From the moment he
(the poet) ventures into FIELD COMPOSITION – puts himself in the open – he can
go by no track other than the one the poem, under hand, declares for itself.
Thus he has to behave, and be, instant by instant, aware of some several forces
just now beginning to be examined (240).
One of the forces
to which Olson was referring was field theory. This comes out of 20th
century physics, and earlier from Faraday’s work with magnets. It has been
expanded, most notably by Rupert Sheldrake’s theories of Morphic Fields and
Morphic Resonance. The unique properties of open form poetics, for me, do give
off a deeper energy than something of the Eliot/New Criticism school and my charge over the next few years is to try and
ascertain why that is and how some are able to sense this. How are some able to
recognize the field which emanates from poems? How is
the background chatter mitigated and the focus so finely-tuned? The work of
McClure in “Dolphin Skull” and also his book inspired by his Zen Buddhist
meditation practice: “Touching The Edge: Dharma Devotions from the Hummingbird
Sangha,” are two of the highest
manifestations of this conscious radiance.
I have sensed this
for years, but got a powerful confirmation when reading these poems around the
fire during the evenings on that island in Clayoquot Sound after the workshops
were done for the day. Dr. Hansard wanted to know the name of the poet whose
work I was reading. When he saw me later with the copy of Touching The Edge, he could actually see
the radiance emanating from that 118 page book. For us non-thunderbeings,
until we can develop that same kind of consciousness, we actually have to read
or listen to it to discover that, but there is something quite satisfying in
that process, eh?
Of course, not
everyone will have the same reaction. Many will be attracted to the unconstrained
fear and desire for outcome that T.S. Eliot represented. What do you think is
the source of power of the current administration? Yet for those sharing what
McClure calls a “hunger for freedom”
(xv), there is little work like his that helps to manifest an American poetics
that the good gray poet himself had envisioned, at a level of consciousness
that does Whitman’s opening salvo justice.
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The Poetry of Parturition, Whitman’s
Opening Salvo.
D.H. Lawrence called him the “first white aboriginal” (19). William
Carlos Williams said on the occasion of the 100th anniversary of the
original publication of Leaves of Grass
that: “I had not known how much the spirit of Whitman animated us until it was
withdrawn from us.” Michael McClure tells us: “Song of Myself
is one of the most detailed records we have of a religious experience” (McClure
interview).
There are two main
themes I think are critical to an understanding of Whitman and his role in
American poetry, especially that of open form. First is the transcendent
experience to which McClure alluded. The second is the need to break wholly
from European precedents (forms, meters) in the creation of a
poetry indigenous to
The form, then,
had to be new. With Whitman, though, the process of creating and recreating
that form was the modality by which he developed his consciousness. It was, as
R.W.B. Lewis writing 50 years ago noted, the identification of self:
European
readers were not slow to recognize in Whitman an authentic rendering of their
own fondest hopes: for if much of his vision had been originally imported from
While Lewis’ notions of Whitman
remain among the most valid for our age, and for
future ones if consciousness is important, I must clarify this notion of
Whitman as creator. What he is creating is not creation per se, but himself
through his work. The preceding quote may not reflect Lewis’ understanding of
that, but elsewhere in the same essay Lewis suggests Whitman had begun by
making himself and perhaps the most striking example “of the self-made man,
with an undeniable grandeur which is the product of his manifest sense of
having been responsible for his own being” (114). He is engaged in that effort
Keats would call soul-making. He was using words to do it. He did go back to edit
and reedit and shape and reshape the poems and order of poems in Leaves of Grass. Asselineau
suggests that each new edition marked a victory and was the resolution to a
spiritual crisis (16). The Open Form of today, as practiced by its most
accomplished practitioners, is more of a fine-tuning, as Gary Snyder puts it,
or a clearly spontaneous gesture in McClure’s hand, than the constant reworking
as in Whitman’s practice. “Words…were in fact the instruments by which he
discovered himself,” says Dr. Hansard (Hansard interview). The writer, charged
with ineffable experience, a sudden shift in perspective, a realization of how
small one is, (or as he “gets huger” to quote “Dolphin Skull” again), a feeling
of not existing as a separate entity, but more like a wave in a giant ocean of
being, can only have poetry to describe that experience of living as “big and
too small to be defined clearly.” Language is perhaps humanity’s most
impressive accomplishment, but still inadequate for the task of relating an
experience as enormous as Whitman’s must have been. The energy which charges Leaves of Grass is remarkable. It is
sexual energy, or that procreant urge turned and used for verse. Albert Gelpi understands that: “Organic poems, like bodies, are
incarnations of spirit, are marriage poems, moving not to the measure of the
metronome but to body rhythms of breath, pulse, heartbeat, sex-throb” (205).
Yet that sexual energy in Whitman was not tied up in lust. He was “innocence
personified” Lewis says and that combination of sexual energy and innocence is
a manifestation of the degree of consciousness from which Whitman was
operating. In fact, Dr. Hansard points out that lust is usually a misplaced
search for that lost innocence.
What builds Whitmanic
consciousness? Certainly overcoming the cognitive dissonance that precedes greater
knowing is one marker. This dissonance may be seen as contradiction and Whitman
is clear on his relationship to paradox:
Do I contradict myself?
Very well then I contradict myself,
I am large,
I contain multitudes (132).
Keats (again) had this notion of
negative capability, or that ability to be at ease with seemingly opposing
views “without any irritable reaching
after fact or reason”. If one can
hold the mystery of seeming opposites, a deeper understanding of the
interconnection emerges. This may be the principle of how new systems organize
if there is anything similar in this to Chaos Theory’s notion of Strange
Attractors. It is also central to the
alchemical experience called the “conuinctio” for
which we have Jung’s work to remind us.
Whitman may never
be more contradicting of himself than in the poem “By Blue Ontario’s Shore.” In stanza ten he suggests “the poet
is the equable man,” yet a few lines later he states:
In war he is the best backer of
the war, he fetches artillery as
good as
the engineer’s, he can make every word he speaks
draw
blood, (369)
but later
in that same stanza:
The attitude of him cheers up
slaves and horrifies
foreign
despots (369).
In the next stanza he seems to be
glorifying war again:
Warlike flag
of the great Idea.
(Angry cloth I saw there
leaping!
I stand again in leaden rain
your flapping folds saluting,
I sing over you all. flying beckoning through the fight – O
the
hard-contested fight!
The cannons ope
their rosy-flashing muzzles-the hurtled balls
scream,
The battle-front forms amid the
smoke-the volleys pour incessant
from the line,
Hark, the ringing word Charge!-now the tussle and the furious
maddening yells,
(360,70)
Again a moment of pure prophecy,
which given his own mystical experience, he could easily foresee:
There will
shortly be no more priests, I say their work is done, (373)
And finally in stanza seventeen of
a twenty stanza poem, he is back to abhorring war, not celebrating it:
The war,
(that war so bloody and grim, the war I will henceforth
forget), was you and me, (375).
You can imagine the self-described
Poet of Democracy having mixed emotions about the war to preserve the union
which he so dearly loved. He was able to see the beauty of the firing cannons
on a purely aesthetic level as when McClure cites the creativity of the flaming
tire round the neck of a murder victim in apartheid-era
Whitman’s friend,
the Canadian psychologist Dr. R.M. Bucke refers to
Whitman’s Cosmic Consciousness. This
quality manifests throughout Leaves of Grass. One could almost open the book at
random and find examples, but let me share a couple of my favorites. Of course “I
Sing The Body Electric” and the sensuality of Whitman describing
the female form is a highlight. It is exquisite and erotic and I can only
imagine how people might have reacted when it was first released. John
Greenleaf Whittier was said to have thrown his copy in the fire and Emily Dickinson
did not read any of Leaves of Grass after
a tip that it was “vulgar”.
5
This is the female form,
A divine nimbus exhales from it
from head to foot,
It attracts with fierce
undeniable attraction,
I am drawn by its breath as if I
were no more than a helpless
vapor, all
falls aside but myself and it,
Books, art, religion, time, the
visible and solid earth, and what
was expected
of heaven or fear’d of hell, are now consumed
Mad filaments, ungovernable
shoots play out of it, the response
likewise ungovernable,
Hair, bosom, hips, bend of legs,
negligent falling hands all
diffused,
mine too diffused,
Ebb stung by the flow and flow
stung by the ebb, love-flesh
swelling and
deliciously aching,
Limitless limpid jets of love
hot and enormous, quivering jelly
of love,
white-blow and delirious juice,
Bridegroom night of love working
surely and swiftly into the
prostrate
dawn,
Undulating into the willing and
yielding day,
Lost in the
cleave of the clasping and sweet-flesh’d day.
This the
nucleus – after the child is born of woman, man is born
of woman,
This the bath of birth, this the
merge of small and large, and
the
outlet again.
Be not ashamed women, your
privilege encloses the rest, and is
the exit of the
rest,
You are the gates of the body,
and you are the gates of the soul (130,1)…
There are also many amazing
passages in “Song of Myself” that clearly communicate this consciousness, both
the words themselves and the field of resonance they emit. From stanza 25:
Dazzling and tremendous how
quick the sun-rise would kill me,
If I could not
now and always send sun-rise out of me (89).
“Eidolons,”
“Poets to Come,” “Are You the New Person Drawn Toward Me?,” “Full of Life Now,”
“Salut au Monde!,” “Song of the Open Road,” “Crossing
Brooklyn Ferry,” “Song of the Answerer,” “Out of the Cradle Endlessly Rocking,”
his elegy for Lincoln - “When Lilacs
Last in the Dooryard Bloom’d,” and many others, but
let me add one that has special resonance for a life-long radio man. Part of
the “Autumn Rivulets” section, a poem entitled “Vocalism”
1
Vocalism,
measure, concentration, determination, and the divine
power to speak words;
Are you full-lung’d and limber lipp’d from the
long trial? from
vigorous
practice? from physique?
Do you move in
these broad lands as broad as they?
Come duly to
the divine power to speak words?
For only at
last after many years, after chastity, friendship,
procreation,
prudence, nakedness,
After treading
ground and breasting river and lake,
After a loosen’d throat, after absorbing eras, temperaments, races
after
knowledge, freedom, crimes
After complete
faith, after clarifyings, elevations and removing
obstructions,
After these and
more, it is just possible there comes to a man,
a woman, the
divine power to speak words;
The toward that
man or that woman swiftly hasten all – none
refuse, all
attend,
Armies, ships,
antiquities, libraries, paintings, machines, cities,
hate, despair,
amity, pain, theft, murder, aspiration, form
in close ranks,
They debouch as
they are wanted to march obediently through
the mouth of
that man or that woman.
2
O what is it in
me that makes me tremble so at voices?
Surely whoever
speaks to me in the right voice, him or her I
shall follow,
As the water
follows the moon, silently, with fluid steps,
anywhere around
the globe.
All waits for
the right voices;
Where is the practis’d and perfect
organ? where is the develop’d
soul?
For I see every
word utter’d thence has deeper, sweeter, new
sounds,
impossible on less terms.
I see brains
and lips closed, tympans and temples unstuck,
Until that
comes which has the quality to strike and to unclose,
Until that
comes which has the quality to bring forth what lies
slumbering
forever ready in all words (404,05).
He understands the pull of a
charismatic voice. Look at the success of Hitler. Had he existed in the
television age, is it likely he would have had the same pull and cooperation of
the German people? Look at Rush Limbaugh. What is it about the power of his
voice that attracts legions of followers who ignore the blatant paradoxes in
his rantings, such as anger and impatience with drug
abusers and the desire for their punishment rather than treatment, standing in
opposition of his own shadow, that addiction to a prescription drug and his
cover-ups and lies regarding it? Or on the positive side,
look at the legacy of Martin Luther King and the riveting “I Have a Dream” speech. The power of the human
voice cannot be understated.
Whitman’s legacy is the level of that
degree of “develop’d soul” he achieved, as revealed in his eternal verse, but also, and
perhaps more important for those trying to achieve some level of soul development,
his creation of a process by which we can either access that dimension, or like
him, experience and document it. It is our duty, as poets in America, to use
our craft, to move through the doors that such a sacred quest opens, to expand
our level of soul development to that which Whitman achieved, while using the
refinements in the open form process(es) (or other
similar methods) that have been created in his wake. Anything less than the
quest for individuation through one’s artistic process seems to me ultimately
negligible.
Port
Asselineau, Roger. The Evolution of Walt Whitman.
Gelpi, Albert. The
Poetics of Open Form: The Mixed Message of Whitman and Williams. The Cast of Consciousness.
Hansard,
Christopher. The Tibetan Art of Positive Thinking.
Hansard Interview –
Hansard, Christopher in an unpublished interview with Paul Nelson.
Lawrence, D.H. Whitman
from Whitman: A Collection of Critical
Essays. Pearce, R.H. Ed.
Lewis, R.W.B. The New
Adam: Whitman, from Whitman: A Collection of Critical Essays.
Englewood-Cliffs: Prentice Hall, R.H. Pierce
Ed. 1962.
McClure, Michael. Three Poems.
McClure interview - Unpublished
interview provided by McClure. (See Sergio interview: Poetry Play Business)
Olson, Charles. Projective Verse from Collected
Prose. Allen, D. and
Friedman, B. Eds.
Olson, Charles. Projective Verse from Poetics
of the New American Poetry.
Allen, D. and Tallman, W. Eds
Whitman, Walt. I Sing
The Body Electric. Leaves of Grass.
[1] ibid, pg 22




