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<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><b style='mso-bidi-font-weight:
normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The Tibetan Bon View of
Sound, Open Form Poetics and Whitman’s Poetry of Parturition<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>On the Summer Solstice 2002 I met a man
described in his press materials as a Lha Khu, or Thunderbeing<a
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in the Tibetan Bon tradition, a person who reincarnates every 700 years to be
the embodiment of medicine. The occasion was an interview for a radio program I
was doing on the book <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>The Tibetan Art of
Living. </i><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>In July of 2004 I was able
to get some time with him, between workshops, to discuss some of the topics
brought up in his second book <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>The Tibetan
Art of Positive Thinking</i> and the subject of sound and Open Form or Field
poetry also came up: <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%;tab-stops:0in'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH - All sound is sacred. It depends on
how you recognize it and then what you do with it. So therefore how you apply
that sound or understand what is within that sound, you then begin to use,
because sound is the body of light. Sound is actually a vibration of light. As
your physical body is an expression of the energy generated by your brain, so
is sound an expression of light.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – You mention, in the book, an
exercise to amplify the power of your brain. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – The brain itself is full of light,
according to the Bon tradition and impulses of energy that rush through your
body and it’s from your brain that you get great energy that generates life
force. There are many Tibetan Bon methods of actually training the brain to
generate a higher resonance, a higher frequency, a bigger field of energy. Your
brain resonates in the Western musical (system) as a G Major, but you can
actually change it and get it to resonate at a different level, here it
emanates a different kind of sound. Your brain is actually a generator. And it
receives and gives out. You can actually get your brain to store more light and
as you store more light, you store more sound. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Is there a tool by which you can
measure levels of consciousness?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Yes, it’s called your heart. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN - How is that quantified for someone
else to recognize?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH - By how good you feel about yourself.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – That’s a difficult one isn’t it?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – No. If you feel truly good, you feel
good, and there’s no other feeling.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Someone can’t read that from a
paper, do you think?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Yes they can.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Can you give an example?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Leaves
of Grass</i> by Walt Whitman.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – As opposed to T.S. Eliot’s <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>The <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:PlaceName
 w:st="on">Waste</st1:PlaceName> <st1:PlaceType w:st="on">Land</st1:PlaceType></st1:place>?<o:p></o:p></i></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Absolutely.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Why?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Because T.S. Eliot wrote out of
unconstrained fear. He always sought an outcome. And Walt Whitman discovered
that words, although seemingly the adventure, were in fact the instruments by
which he discovered himself. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – “I sing myself and therefore what I
assume you shall assume<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>.</i>”<i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'> </i><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Absolutely.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Right, right right, so some of the Field
poetry of post-World War Two American poetics talk about the opening of the
field (which) was Robert Duncan’s book.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH –Absolutely.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – So this energy is greater than, can
be quantified as having more energy than something by Tate or Ransom or these
kinds of folks?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH –Yes, absolutely.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – How would you… [define that]?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Because all people in their deepest
beings are like that type of poetry. [Duncan, Whitman, Open Form poets.]<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Meaning…?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – That when you look at Walt Whitman
for example, all people wish to be in that way. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – That way being in touch with the
universal oneness of all things?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Yes. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Yeah. And that stream of poetry that
is taught in the academy by and large, the New Criticism, the Donald Hall…<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – I think you can relate that to the
kinds of developments in psychology and psychotherapy and misinformation that
Freud created. In the same way, it’s a poetry of doubt and fear. It’s a poetry
of empirical doubt, and it’s the kind of poetry that likes to put things in a box
because you can.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Is it a poetry of pathologizing
rather than mythologizing? <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – No, it’s a poetry of forensics.
There’s nothing wrong with that if you’re in a court case, but the fact is that
you are actually a human being living a life that is too big and too small to
be defined clearly. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – Can you talk to us about body wisdom
and breath is the key to accessing it…in the written word?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – Yes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – And how does one get that somatic…<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>CH – By speaking it.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>PN – You fucker. (Loud laughs.) Alright, I
quit.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>At
this point the interview ended and we sat on the deck of the house on this <st1:City
w:st="on">rock island</st1:City> in <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">British
  Columbia</st1:State></st1:place>’s Clayoquot Sound, watching the Pacific
waves, eating potato chips and drinking beer. It was an afternoon after a
workshop on “The Art of Listening”<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'> </i>had
just ended and another workshop was to begin the next day. I had laughed
because part of Christopher’s approach to working with me was to ask that I
stand in front of the gathered and improvise poetry aloud to them. Is there
anything more frightening? Perhaps, but it must involve heights, wild animals,
nudity and sharp objects. Spontaneous poetry performance was enough of a
challenge for me, hence the laughter and resignation in my reaction to
Christopher’s response to my question about accessing the power of the body,
which Walt Whitman said is the soul. Michael McClure echoes that sentiment in
his brilliant poem “Dolphin Skull”.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>     </span></span></i><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The
body is the soul.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>    </span>The intelligent body
(11).<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><o:p></o:p></i></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>So what do Walt Whitman, the Tibetan Bon
tradition and Michael McClure have in common? They are all integral components
of my process of making sense out of why I chose to incarnate in this body at
this time on this planet. All three are part of what McClure has called a <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>systemless system</i>. In my case, it’s an effort
to make meaning out of experience as Whitman and McClure have done, with words.
I have had the most profound experiences of my life with McClure’s poetry and
with Tibetan Bon healing modalities. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>My experience with McClure began in 1995,
when the book <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Three Poems </i>crossed my
desk, as many review copies do. Something about it made me want to interview
him. I had met and interviewed Allen Ginsberg the year before and at that time
vaguely knew McClure had a connection to Allen. My intuition was working that
day. I read the book, some of it during a backpacking trip in the Olympic
National Park and some of that in an intense grief ritual conducted at 5,000
feet. After backpacking, I conducted the interview and went out to lunch with
Michael at a Vietnamese restaurant, “courtesy of Penguin Poets,” Michael said.
Since then I have been on a quest to understand why McClure’s poetry has such
resonance for me. He tipped me off to “Projective Verse” on that October day
and suggested I read it aloud. Yet, who else claims to write in “Projective
Verse” as McClure does? In my nine year investigation I have found few that
claim to do so, yet many who are organically using parts of that suggestion.
Michael has told me it was <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>a suggestion</i>
by Olson, though written in a manner that pays homage to Ezra Pound’s bombastic
style. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>In “Projective Verse,” Olson suggests the
opposite of what Hansard called “the poetry of doubt and fear<i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>,” </i>the need to seek an outcome. Olson
says: <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.25in;line-height:150%'><i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></i></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>From the moment he (the poet) ventures
into FIELD COMPOSITION – puts himself in the open – he can go by no track other
than the one the poem, under hand, declares for itself. Thus he has to behave,
and be, instant by instant, aware of some several forces just now beginning to
be examined (240).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.25in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>One of the forces to which Olson was
referring was Field theory. This comes out of 20<sup>th</sup> century physics,
and earlier from Faraday’s work with magnets. It has been expanded, most
notably by Rupert Sheldrake’s theories of Morphic Fields and Morphic Resonance.
The unique properties of Open Form poetics, for me, do give off a deeper energy
than something of the Eliot/New Criticism school and my charge over the next
few years is to try and ascertain why that is and how some are able to sense
this. How are some able to recognize the field which emanates from poems? How
is the background chatter mitigated and the focus so finely-tuned? The work of
McClure in “Dolphin Skull” and also his book inspired by his Zen Buddhist
meditation practice: “Touching The Edge: Dharma Devotions from the Hummingbird
Sangha<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>,</i>” are two of the highest
manifestations of this conscious radiance. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I have sensed this for years, but got a
powerful confirmation when reading these poems around the fire during the
evenings on that island in Clayoquot Sound after the workshops were done for
the day. Mr. Hansard wanted to know the name of the poet whose work I was
reading. When he saw me later with the copy of <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>Touching The Edge</i>, he said he could actually see the radiance
emanating from that 118 page book. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Of course, not everyone will have the
same reaction. Many will be attracted to the unconstrained fear and desire for
outcome that T.S. Eliot represented. What do you think is the source of power
of the administration of President George W. Bush? Yet for those sharing what
McClure calls a <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>“</i>hunger for freedom”
(xv), there is little work like his that helps to manifest an American poetics
that the good gray poet himself had envisioned, at a level of consciousness
that does Whitman’s opening salvo justice.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center;line-height:150%'><b
style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The
Poetry of Parturition, Whitman’s Opening Salvo.<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:6.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:6.0pt;
margin-left:0in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>D.H. Lawrence called him the<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'> “</i>first white aboriginal” (19). William Carlos Williams said on the
occasion of the 100<sup>th</sup> anniversary of the original publication of <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Leaves of Grass</i> that: “I had not known
how much the spirit of Whitman animated us until it was withdrawn from us.”
Michael McClure tells us: “Song of Myself is one of the most detailed records
we have of a religious experience” (McClure interview).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>There are two main themes I think are
critical to an understanding of Whitman and his role in American poetry,
especially that of Open Form. First is the transcendent experience to which
McClure alluded. The second is the need to break wholly from European
precedents (forms, meters) in the creation of a poetry indigenous to <st1:place
w:st="on"><st1:country-region w:st="on">America</st1:country-region></st1:place>.
It is this combination of the experience of the miraculous and form being an
extension of content (or <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>revelation </i>as
Denise Levertov appended Robert Creeley) that created the remarkable foundation
upon which Open Form in North American poetry exists (and one could add Latin
and South American poetry as well, but that is a subject for another inquiry).
That foundation was a transcendent experience and an open process by which
Whitman could better understand that experience. Come to terms with it. Get
some kind of handle on it, but not too tight a grip as to suffocate it, or put
it into that box Dr. Hansard described. To have the faith to go into the
literary wilderness and somehow trust that process that Olson in “Projective
Verse” described as speech at its “least careless and least logical” (241). So,
into the literary wilderness went Walt Whitman. He had a better idea of what
wilderness actually was as he was born in a time and a place where that
wilderness was still readily accessible. As Robert Bly has pointed out, the
sonnet was a form more applicable to the prim English countryside rather than
the fierce and scary wilderness that was lurking on the continent on which
Whitman found himself and somehow understood his role as spokesman for that new
experiment that had, by the time of the first edition of <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>Leaves of Grass</i> already assumed transcontinental proportions. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The form, then, had to be new. With
Whitman, though, the process of creating and recreating that form was the modality
by which he developed his consciousness. It was, as R.W.B. Lewis writing 50
years ago noted, the identification of self: <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:0in;margin-right:.25in;margin-bottom:0in;
margin-left:.5in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height:150%;tab-stops:405.0pt 5.75in'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>European readers were not slow to
recognize in Whitman an authentic rendering of their own fondest hopes: for if
much of his vision had been originally imported from <st1:country-region w:st="on">Germany</st1:country-region>
and <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:country-region w:st="on">France</st1:country-region></st1:place>,
it had plainly lost its portion of nostalgia en route. While European
romanticism continued to resent the effect of time, Whitman was announcing that
time had only just begun. He was able to think so because of the facts of
immediate history in <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:country-region w:st="on">America</st1:country-region></st1:place>
during the years when he was maturing: when a world was, in some literal way,
being created before his eyes. It was this that Whitman was able to dramatize;
and it was this that gave <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Leaves of Grass</i>
its special quality of a Yankee Genesis: a new account of the creation of the
world; an account this time with a happy ending for Adam its hero; or better
yet, no ending at all; and this important emendation, that now the creature has
taken on the role of the creator (111).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.25in;line-height:150%;tab-stops:9.0pt .25in 405.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>While
Lewis’ notions of Whitman remain among the most valid for our age, and for
future ones if consciousness is important, I must clarify this notion of
Whitman as creator. What he is creating is not creation per se, but himself
through his work. The preceding quote may not reflect Lewis’ understanding of
that, but elsewhere in the same essay Lewis suggests Whitman had begun by
making himself and perhaps the most striking example “of the self-made man,
with an undeniable grandeur which is the product of his manifest sense of
having been responsible for his own being” (114). He is engaged in that effort
Keats would call soul-making. He was using words to do it. He did go back to
edit and reedit and shape and reshape the poems and order of poems in <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Leaves of Grass</i>. Asselineau suggests
that each new edition marked a victory and was the resolution to a spiritual
crisis (16). The Open Form of today, as practiced by its most accomplished
practitioners, is more of a fine-tuning, as Gary Snyder puts it, or a clearly
spontaneous gesture in McClure’s hand, than the constant reworking as in
Whitman’s practice. “Words…were in fact the instruments by which he discovered
himself,” says Mr. Hansard (Hansard interview). The writer, charged with
ineffable experience, a sudden shift in perspective, a realization of how small
one is, (or as he “gets huger” to quote “Dolphin Skull” again), a feeling of
not existing as a separate entity, but more like a wave in a giant ocean of
being, can only have poetry to describe that experience of living as “big and
too small to be defined clearly.”<br>
Language is perhaps humanity’s most impressive accomplishment, but still
inadequate for the task of relating an experience as enormous as Whitman’s must
have been. The energy which charges <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Leaves
of Grass</i> is remarkable. It is sexual energy, or that procreant urge turned
and used for verse. Albert Gelpi understands that: “Organic poems, like bodies,
are incarnations of spirit, are marriage poems, moving not to the measure of
the metronome but to body rhythms of breath, pulse, heartbeat, sex-throb”
(205). Yet that sexual energy in Whitman was not tied up in lust. He was
“innocence personified” Lewis says and that combination of sexual energy and
innocence is a manifestation of the degree of consciousness from which Whitman
was operating. In fact, Mr. Hansard suggests lust is usually a misplaced search
for that lost innocence.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>What builds Whitmanic consciousness?
Certainly overcoming the cognitive dissonance that precedes greater knowing is
one marker. This dissonance may be seen as contradiction and Whitman is clear
on his relationship to paradox: <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Do
I contradict myself?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Very
well then I contradict myself,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I
am large, I contain multitudes (132).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Keats
(again) had this notion of negative capability, or that ability to be at ease
with seemingly opposing views<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'> “</i>without
any irritable reaching after fact or reason”<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>.</i>
If one can hold the mystery of seeming opposites, a deeper understanding of the
interconnection emerges. This may be the principle of how new systems organize
if there is anything similar in this to Chaos Theory’s notion of Strange
Attractors<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>.</i> It is also central to the
alchemical experience called the “conuinctio” for which we have Jung’s work to
remind us.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Whitman may never be more contradicting
of himself than in the poem “By Blue Ontario’s Shore<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>.” </i>In stanza ten he suggests “the poet is the equable man,” yet a
few lines later he states:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:0in;margin-right:27.35pt;margin-bottom:
0in;margin-left:27.35pt;margin-bottom:.0001pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>In
war he is the best backer of the war, he fetches artillery as<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:0in;margin-right:27.35pt;margin-bottom:
0in;margin-left:27.35pt;margin-bottom:.0001pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>good
as the engineer’s, he can make every word he speaks<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:0in;margin-right:27.35pt;margin-bottom:
0in;margin-left:27.35pt;margin-bottom:.0001pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>draw
blood, (369)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-top:0in;margin-right:27.0pt;margin-bottom:
0in;margin-left:27.0pt;margin-bottom:.0001pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>but
later in that same stanza:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The
attitude of him cheers up slaves and horrifies<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>foreign
despots (369).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.0pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>In
the next stanza he seems to be glorifying war again:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Warlike
flag of the great Idea.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>(Angry
cloth I saw there leaping!<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I
stand again in leaden rain your flapping folds saluting,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I
sing over you all. flying beckoning through the fight – O<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>     </span>the hard-contested fight!<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The
cannons ope their rosy-flashing muzzles-the hurtled balls<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>     </span>scream,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The
battle-front forms amid the smoke-the volleys pour incessant<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>     </span>from the line,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Hark,
the ringing word <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Charge</i>!-now the
tussle and the furious<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>     </span>maddening yells, (360,70)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Again
a moment of pure prophecy, which given his own mystical experience, he could easily
foresee:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.0pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.0pt;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>There will shortly be no more priests, I
say their work is done, (373)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>And
finally in stanza seventeen of a twenty stanza poem, he is back to abhorring
war, not celebrating it:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>          </span>The war, (that war so bloody and
grim, the war I will henceforth <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                  </span>forget), was you and me,
(375).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>You
can imagine the self-described Poet of Democracy having mixed emotions about
the war to preserve the union which he so dearly loved. He was able to see the
beauty of the firing cannons on a purely aesthetic level as when McClure cites
the creativity of the flaming tire round the neck of a murder victim in
apartheid-era <st1:country-region w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">South Africa</st1:place></st1:country-region>,
though he certainly would not approve of such an act, or the smell of lizard
excrement on the fingers. Or how bullets fire into a world made of stacks of
dirty feet, eyes of starving families…Yet Whitman’s actions from when he was
against using corporal punishment as a schoolmaster in Long Island to his days
as a volunteer hospital worker during the war speak as highly of the depth of
his consciousness if the contradictions of his verse leave one any doubt. And
with the strange quality of any practitioners of Open Form, there is ample room
for doubt for many readers. It is a rare person who can turn off enough of that
background noise, cultural chatter and literary expectations developed by work
that does not seek to accomplish as much. Even in Olympic Games there are
degrees of difficulty.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Whitman’s friend, the Canadian
psychologist Dr. R.M. Bucke refers to Whitman’s C<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>osmic Consciousness.</i> This quality manifests throughout Leaves of
Grass. One could almost open the book at random and find examples, but let me
share a couple of my favorites. Of course “I Sing The Body Electric” and the
sensuality of Whitman describing the female form is a highlight. It is
exquisite and erotic and I can only imagine how people might have reacted when
it was first released. John Greenleaf Whittier was said to have thrown his copy
in the fire and Emily Dickinson did not read any of <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>Leaves of Grass </i>after a tip that it was “vulgar”. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.0pt;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>5<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>This
is the female form,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>A
divine nimbus exhales from it from head to foot,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>It
attracts with fierce undeniable attraction,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I
am drawn by its breath as if I were no more than a helpless<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>vapor, all falls aside but myself and
it,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Books,
art, religion, time, the visible and solid earth, and what<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>was expected of heaven or fear’d of
hell, are now consumed<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Mad
filaments, ungovernable shoots play out of it, the response<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>likewise ungovernable,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Hair,
bosom, hips, bend of legs, negligent falling hands all<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>diffused, mine too diffused,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Ebb
stung by the flow and flow stung by the ebb, love-flesh<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>swelling and deliciously aching,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Limitless
limpid jets of love hot and enormous, quivering jelly<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>of love, white-blow and delirious
juice,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Bridegroom
night of love working surely and swiftly into the<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>prostrate dawn,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Undulating
into the willing and yielding day,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Lost
in the cleave of the clasping and sweet-flesh’d day.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>This
the nucleus – after the child is born of woman, man is born<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>of woman,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>This
the bath of birth, this the merge of small and large, and<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>the
outlet again.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Be
not ashamed women, your privilege encloses the rest, and is<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>         </span>the exit of the rest,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>You
are the gates of the body, and you are the gates of the soul (130,1)…<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:27.0pt;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>There
are also many amazing passages in “Song of Myself” that clearly communicate
this consciousness, both the words themselves and the field of resonance they
emit. From stanza 25:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Dazzling
and tremendous how quick the sun-rise would kill me,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>If
I could not now and always send sun-rise out of me (89).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>“</span></i><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>Eidolons,” “Poets to Come,” “Are You the New Person Drawn
Toward Me?,” “Full of Life Now,” “Salut au Monde!,” “Song of the Open Road,”
“Crossing Brooklyn Ferry,” “Song of the Answerer,” “Out of the Cradle Endlessly
Rocking,” his elegy for Lincoln<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>- “When
Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom’d,” and many others, but let me add one that
has special resonance for a life-long radio man. Part of the “Autumn Rivulets”
section, a poem entitled “Vocalism”<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='margin-left:27.0pt;text-align:center;
line-height:200%;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>1<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Vocalism, measure, concentration,
determination, and the divine<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>power to speak words;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Are you full-lung’d and limber lipp’d
from the long trial? from<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>vigorous practice? from physique?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Do you move in these broad lands as broad
as they?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Come duly to the divine power to speak
words?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>For only at last after many years, after
chastity, friendship,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>procreation, prudence, nakedness,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>After treading ground and breasting river
and lake,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>After a loosen’d throat, after absorbing
eras, temperaments, races<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>after knowledge, freedom, crimes<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>After complete faith, after clarifyings,
elevations and removing<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>obstructions,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>After these and more, it is just possible
there comes to a man,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>a woman, the divine power to speak words;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>The toward that man or that woman swiftly
hasten all – none<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>refuse, all attend,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Armies, ships, antiquities, libraries,
paintings, machines, cities,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>hate, despair, amity, pain, theft, murder, aspiration, form<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>in close ranks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>They debouch as they are wanted to march
obediently through<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>the mouth of that man or that woman.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='margin-left:27.35pt;text-align:center;
tab-stops:27.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>2<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='margin-left:27.35pt;text-align:center;
tab-stops:27.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>O what is it in me that makes me tremble
so at voices?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Surely whoever speaks to me in the right
voice, him or her I<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>shall follow,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>As the water follows the moon, silently,
with fluid steps,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>anywhere around the globe.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>All waits for the right voices;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Where is the practis’d and perfect organ?
where is the develop’d<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>soul?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>For I see every word utter’d thence has
deeper, sweeter, new<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>      
</span>sounds, impossible on less terms.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I see brains and lips closed, tympans and
temples unstuck,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Until that comes which has the quality to
strike and to unclose,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Until that comes which has the quality to
bring forth what lies<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.35pt;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>       
</span>slumbering forever ready in all words (404,05).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:27.0pt;line-height:200%;tab-stops:27.0pt'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>He
understands the pull of a charismatic voice. Look at the success of Hitler. Had
he existed in the television age, is it likely he would have had the same pull
and cooperation of the German people? Look at Rush Limbaugh. What is it about
the power of his voice that attracts legions of followers who ignore the
blatant paradoxes in his rantings, such as anger and impatience with drug
abusers and the desire for their punishment rather than treatment, standing in
opposition of his own shadow, that addiction to a prescription drug and his
cover-ups and lies regarding it? Or on the positive side, look at the legacy of
Martin Luther King and the riveting “I Have a Dream”<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'> </i>speech. The power of the human voice cannot be understated. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Whitman’s</span></i><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'> legacy is the level of that degree of
“develop’d soul”<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'> </i>he achieved, as
revealed in his eternal verse, but also, and perhaps more important for those
trying to achieve some level of soul development, his creation of a process by
which we can either access that dimension, or like him, experience and document
it. It is our duty, as poets in America, to use our craft, to move through the
doors that such a sacred quest opens, to expand our level of soul development
to that which Whitman achieved, while using the refinements in the Open Form
process(es) (or other similar methods) that have been created in his wake.
Anything less than the quest for individuation through one’s artistic process
seems to me ultimately negligible.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Port <st1:place
w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Townsend</st1:City>, <st1:State w:st="on">WA</st1:State></st1:place><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>November 2, 2004
11:07 PM<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText align=center style='text-align:center;line-height:150%'><b
style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:
150%'>Works Cited:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>Asselineau, Roger. “The Evolution of Walt Whitman.” <st1:City
w:st="on">Iowa City</st1:City>: <st1:State w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">Iowa</st1:place></st1:State>
Press, 1999.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>Gelpi, Albert. “The Poetics of Open Form: The Mixed Message
of Whitman and Williams.”<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>“The Cast of
Consciousness.”<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span><st1:City w:st="on"><span
 class=medium-normal>Westport</span></st1:City><span class=medium-normal>, <st1:State
w:st="on">CT</st1:State>:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><st1:City
w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">Greenwood</st1:place></st1:City>,<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>1987</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>Hansard, Christopher. “The Tibetan Art of Positive Thinking.”
<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">London</st1:City></st1:place>: Hodder
Mobius,<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>2003.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:150%'>Hansard Interview – Hansard,
Christopher in an unpublished interview with Paul Nelson.</p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:150%'>Lawrence, D.H.<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>“Whitman from Whitman: A Collection of
Critical Essays.” Pearce, R.H. Ed. <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Englewood</st1:City></st1:place>
Cliffs: Prentice Hall,<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>1962.</p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:150%'>Lewis, R.W.B. “The New Adam:
Whitman, from Whitman: A Collection of Critical Essays.” Englewood-Cliffs:<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>Prentice Hall,<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>R.H. Pierce Ed. 1962.</p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:150%'>McClure, Michael.<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>“Three Poems.”<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">New
  York</st1:State></st1:place>: Penguin Poets, 1995.</p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>McClure interview - Unpublished interview provided by
McClure. (See Sergio interview: Poetry Play Business)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>Olson, Charles. “Projective Verse from Collected Prose.”
Allen, D. and Friedman, B. Eds.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span><st1:City
w:st="on">Berkeley</st1:City>: <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">California</st1:State></st1:place>,
1997.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>Olson, Charles.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> 
</span>“Projective Verse from Poetics of the New American Poetry.”<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>Allen, D. and Tallman, W. Eds<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">New
  York</st1:State></st1:place>:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>Grove
Press, 1973.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'>Whitman, Walt. “I Sing The Body Electric.” “Leaves of Grass.”
<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">New York</st1:State></st1:place>:
Bantam,<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>1892 ed, 1983.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span class=MsoEndnoteReference><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-special-character:footnote'><![if !supportFootnotes]><span
class=MsoEndnoteReference><span style='font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA'>[1]</span></span><![endif]></span></span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'> ibid, pg 22<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoEndnoteText style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoFootnoteText><a style='mso-footnote-id:ftn1' href="#_ftnref1"
name="_ftn1" title=""><span class=MsoFootnoteReference><span style='mso-special-character:
footnote'><![if !supportFootnotes]><span class=MsoFootnoteReference><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-fareast-font-family:
"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;
mso-bidi-language:AR-SA'>[1]</span></span><![endif]></span></span></a> Since
the interview the Tibetan credentials of Christopher Hansard have come into
question. I have not been able to verify them, but feel despite that, there is
something of value in his perspective regardless.</p>

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