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<p align=center style='text-align:center;line-height:200%'><strong>Annotated
Bibliography of Third Semester </strong><st1:City><st1:place><span class=GramE><strong>Reading</strong></span></st1:place></st1:City><span
class=GramE><strong><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>-</strong></span><strong>
Paul Nelson<o:p></o:p></strong></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'>Blaser, Robin.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><u>The
Violets: A Cosmological </u></span><st1:City><st1:place><u><span
  style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>Reading</span></u></st1:place></st1:City><u><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'> of a Cosmology.</span></u><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span></span><st1:City><st1:place><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:
  200%'>Claremont</span></st1:place></st1:City><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'>:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>Process Studies, pp8-37, Vol. 13,
Number 1, <span class=GramE>Spring</span> 1983<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Robin Blaser
may be the most credible poet/scholar to comment about Charles Olson’s prime
source, Alfred North Whitehead. It is interesting to note that this essay
appeared not in a literary journal, but in one on the study of process. This is
<span class=GramE>key</span>, because Blaser, as a working Open Form poet,
understands the critical nature of an understanding of Olson is in the process
he adapted from Ezra Pound and William Carlos Williams, among others and
articulated in his essay Projective Verse. In fact Blaser boils down Olson’s
poetics to two main points, those being stance and ethos. He also recognizes
that in the poetry and poetics of the most important poets, Olson included, there
is, in <span class=SpellE>Blaser’s</span> words, “a spiritual chase” (8) that
is in their arguments, essays and poetry in general, a cosmology and
epistemology is being weaved into the work over and over again. He points out
that: “Whitehead’s sense of reality as process…stands to correct both
materialism and idealism in their command over us” (9). He also shows
Whitehead’s forerunners in the process mode of thinking, leading back through
Hegel, <span class=SpellE>Lotse</span>, <span class=SpellE>Schelling</span>,
Herder and <span class=SpellE>Liebnitz</span> and through his Jesuit friends to
Neo-Confucian Li and <span class=SpellE>Chu</span> <span class=SpellE>Hsi</span>,
which is understandable. Chinese culture, until the 20<sup>th</sup> Century,
was based very much in <span class=GramE>an</span> holistic cosmology. It might
be said the best of Western culture can be traced back to the three teachings
of Chinese culture, Buddhism, Confucianism and Taoism.<span style='mso-tab-count:
1'>            </span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'>Extensive examination by Blaser of Olson’s <span
class=GramE>papers,</span> and the notations on Olson’s copies of Whitehead’s
books, especially <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Process and Reality</i>
and <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>The Aims of Education</i> allows him
to get into the mind of Olson and make sense of how he was able to give
Whitehead’s theories the most noble tribute, by way of USE. Blaser is able to
help us translate: “a metaphysics back into poetry, there to re-tie us to the
real” (24). Violets are a recurring theme in Olson’s poetry, perhaps influenced
by William Carlos Williams in Williams’ poem referring to Einstein, and while
the natural world remains basically the same as eighty years ago, (Mt. St.
Helens may erupt, but twenty years later new life is thriving), the old
spiritual forms which “held” the real together for hundreds of years have come
loose. Blaser knows Olson’s process poetics, are his cosmology, are sourced in
most notably in Whitehead and are a modality for escaping the personal cost of
life in a mechanistic, control-oriented culture.<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Bram,
<span class=SpellE>Shahar</span>.&nbsp;&nbsp; Charles Olson and Alfred North
Whitehead: An Essay on Poetry. </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in'>Lewisburg:&nbsp; <st1:place><st1:PlaceName><span
  class=SpellE>Bucknell</span></st1:PlaceName> <st1:PlaceType>University</st1:PlaceType></st1:place>
Press,<span class=GramE>&nbsp; 2004</span>.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>I have not
seen a better summary of the critical nature of the impact of Whitehead’s
philosophy on Olson’s poetics, which are his cosmology. In this well-designed
essay, Bram quickly lays out some critical points about what poetry is to
Olson:</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>…poetry is not a poem: the name of an
object, a finished aesthetic object, the outcome of a process is negligible.
Rather, the poem is <span class=SpellE>poesis</span>; the process of creation
and the poem are, at most, two names or two perspectives for contemplating the
same activity, the creativity of a human being in the world; (12)</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>Olson argues that Whitehead “only refines
and corrects the most ancient myth-cosmos” and “Olson’s poetic act constitutes
a critique of prevailing norms and a proposal for an alternative ethos, which
he actualized as a poetics. The poem is an act and a call to act, the building
of a new (re-<span class=SpellE>newed</span>) identity for the individual and
the community; (12)</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>“<span class=GramE>every</span> place,
according to Olson, is an opening place, and can serve as a gate inward that
can be used to return outward, after further growth. (14); and most
importantly:</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'><span class=GramE>“Olson does not adopt the
scientific worldview and its concepts metaphorically” (15).</span> This last
point can’t be understated, and Olson may have been TOO committed to process.
Much of The Maximus Poems turns out to be field notes and jottings which, for
other poets, would be not more than material for new poems. Olson leaves them
all in so his process is completely transparent and Bram concludes his
introduction with the notion that The Maximus Poems has “an acute sense of
failure in the concluding section of the poem” (17). (In the Blaser essay he
says Olson felt he needed another ten years.)</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Another
place Bram gets to matters rarely discussed by Olson critics, or anyone else,
is the notion of the field. Michael McClure told me this is a concept that
Olson got from Robert Duncan and Olson does call his Open Form composition
process <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Composition by Field</i>, sort of
as a subtitle of Projective Verse. As Bram points out, the concept of field
denotes “a dismissal of the traditional perception of space” (20). He used Albert
Einstein as his scientific source to relate the importance of this branch of
physics from the 1947 book <u>The Evolution of Physics</u>: “A new concept
appears in physics, the most important invention since Newton’s time: ‘…the
field…it is not the charges, nor the particles but the field of space between
the charges and the particles which is essential for the description of
physical phenomena’” (20). <st1:City><st1:place>Newton</st1:place></st1:City>’s
concept of an empty world and matter being similar to billiard balls bouncing
off each other misses the pocket with 20<sup>th</sup> century advances in field
theory. Fields became the fundamental variables. This notion, combined with
Whitehead’s concept that the universe can be perceived as a single physical
system, among other concepts, provided the philosophic grounding for what Olson
had intuited with the notion of projection. Applied to poetry, words become
more than signifiers, or sound. They are units of energy. They act in relation
to other words in the field that is the poem. The energy they emit likely
corresponds to the kind of resonance a certain thing may have, it’s own energy,
the energy of a forest stream, a freight train, a lover’s kiss. The poem is a dynamic,
energetic field and as such a place of enactment and encounter” (23). </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>The limits
of Cartesian thinking have been well documented, though we still live in a very
Newtonian/Cartesian culture of competition and domination. The chapter on
Descartes to me seemed like beating a dead horse, but this is 30 years after
Olson’s death and I have studied this old paradigm and the emerging one
extensively. I did find some interesting tidbits in the chapter on <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Fluency</i>, such as how Whitehead “bestows a
new, more “open” content on the concept of causality: the macroscopic process is
conditioned by the past, but is open to changes suggested by the present with
its new ‘<span class=SpellE>prehensions</span>.’ The subject re-enacts the
world and grows with it” (83). This notion may be the most critical one for
those who believe that developing a discipline in an Open Form process allows a
deepening on one’s consciousness. Bram also points out Olson’s notion, out of
Whitehead, that the poem is an organism, and that “we have the ability to
create, which is to narrate, which is the ability to bloom” (85) is also critical
for the notion of individuation through Olson’s method, or others based on, or
similar to, it.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>There are
many other salient points, but I’ll refer to the last of them under two basic
headings. The first is the notion that what ails us did not begin with the
apple that fell on <st1:City><st1:place>Newton</st1:place></st1:City> and the
paradigm we associate with him and Rene Descartes. In Olson’s view the
separation of myth and logos, starting with the pre-Socratic philosophers, with
the autonomy of thought (intellect) leading away from the concrete, and that of
experience in favor of abstraction; the separation of the ontic and epistemic
levels (revealed versus concealed; subject versus object); Olson suggests this
is when the decisive split happened in Western culture. </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>The second
of these last two notions is called the “Stance.” His stance is USE. To dig for
this information and create a process out of a cosmology that rectifies the
split in Western culture that Olson suggests goes back to 450 BC. Using the
demotic, the concrete, applying it to one’s community (polis) using a process
that <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>does not seek to describe, but enact</i>,
these are all aspects of the brilliance of Olson’s poetics. Bram lays them all
out in terms of their primary source in the cosmology of Whitehead more clearly
than has even been done.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Hawkins, David.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><u>Power
<span class=GramE>Vs</span>. Force</u><i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>.</i><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>Sedona:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span><span class=SpellE>Veritas</span>,<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span>2004.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>This is one
of the most critical books of our time. While the science in it may be subject
to scrutiny, the consciousness model it illustrates can be used as a metaphor
with great benefits to the reader. His basic premise is that there is a
difference between Power and Force. Power is associated with the whole while
Force with the partial. Hawkins says: “On examination we…see that power arises
from meaning...it is always associated with that which supports the
significance of life itself…(whereas) Force must be justified” Power requires
no such justification. (108). <span class=GramE>As</span> an example of Power
he suggests the example of Mahatma Gandhi and his non-violent resistance.
Compare that with the policies of George W. <span class=GramE>Bush,</span>
especially the justification of the war in <st1:country-region><st1:place>Iraq</st1:place></st1:country-region>
and you can clearly see what Hawkins is getting at. He says Force always
creates counterforce.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Central to
our thesis, Hawkins likens Force to a movement, whereas Power is a field.
Gravity may be understood as a Power in Hawkins definition. Its power moves all
objects within its field, but it does not move. To elaborate on the critical
nature of meaning, Hawkins says: “Force has transient goals; when those goals
are reached there remains the emptiness of meaninglessness. <span class=GramE>Power,
on the other hand, motivates us endlessly” (110).</span> “Victory over others
brings us satisfaction, but victory over ourselves brings us joy” (111).</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Hawkins
understands that the key to the lack of evolution is that society looks to
correct <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>effects</i>, instead of <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>causes</i>. (This is at the core of our
health care “system.”) And in a passage that strikes me as eerily similar to
Olson’s notion of Projective Verse, Hawkins cites the main obstacle to man’s
development is the lack of knowledge about the nature of consciousness. He
says: “If we look within ourselves at the instant-by-instant processes of our
minds, we will soon notice that the mind acts much more rapidly than it would
acknowledge. It becomes apparent that the notion that our actions are based on
thoughtful decisions is a grand illusion. The decision-making process is a
function of consciousness itself; with enormous rapidity, the mind makes
choices based on millions of pieces of data and their correlations and
projections, far beyond conscious comprehension. <span class=GramE>This is a
global function dominated by the energy patterns which the new science of
non-linear dynamics terms attractors” (21).</span> (In Projective Verse, Olson
starts with a quote from Edward Dahlberg: “ONE PERCEPTION MUST IMMEDIATELY LEAD
TO A FURTHER PERCEPTION. It means exactly what it says, is a matter of, at <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>all</i> points (even, I should say, of our
management of daily reality as of the daily work) get on with it, keep moving,
keep in, speed, the nerves, their speed, the perceptions, theirs, the acts, the
split second acts, the whole business, keep it moving as fast as you can,
citizen. And if you also set up as a poet, USE <span class=SpellE>USE</span> <span
class=SpellE>USE</span> the process at all points, in any given poem always,
always one perception must <span class=SpellE>must</span> <span class=SpellE>must</span>
MOVE, INSTANTER, ON ANOTHER” (Olson <u>Collected Prose</u> 240)!<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Hawkins’ <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Map of Consciousness </i>suggests a
numerical value for human traits, or emotions, rising from Shame, Guilt,
Apathy, Grief, Fear, Desire, Anger, <span class=GramE>Pride</span> and, at what
Hawkins calls the level of “integrity,” Courage. Up from there he cites
Neutrality, Willingness, Acceptance, Reason, Love, Joy, Peace and finally
Enlightenment. The problem here is the numerical system. He claims to have
scientifically tested this through kinesiology (muscle testing) and that this
modality can work to measure the fields of anything, including works of
Literature, Buildings and other things. This is where Hawkins gets out on shaky
ground, in my view, but if one looks at this map as a metaphor, it is extremely
useful in terms of understanding how one’s thoughts and actions resonate and
how to move up the scale and experience the higher attractor fields of Love,
Joy and Peace. </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Hill, Steven<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><u>Fixing
Elections<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span></u><span class=SpellE>Routledge</span>:<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><st1:State><st1:place>New York</st1:place></st1:State>,<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>    </span>2002<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>A book not
central to my thesis, but used as an example of one of the great challenges of
American society and the cultural issues behind that, namely our system of
elections. This is perhaps the main way the competition/domination paradigm
works in our society and is summed up by the notion of Winner Take All, with
its operative principles:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>“If I win…You lose<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>If I have representation…you don’t<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>If I vote for my favorite candidate
who has no chance of winning…I’ll help elect my least favorite candidate<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>If we’re for it…then they’re against
it…” (43)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Hill argues
for a Proportional Representation system of elections, and understands behind
those political divisions are racial and ethnic fears which are driving our
political discourse.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'>Lee, Stephen.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span><span
class=GramE><u>Scientific Investigation into Chinese <span class=SpellE>QiGong</span>.</u></span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span></span><st1:City><st1:place><span
  style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>San <span class=SpellE>Clemente</span></span></st1:place></st1:City><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> 
</span></span><st1:country-region><st1:place><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
  line-height:200%'>China</span></st1:place></st1:country-region><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'> <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>Pathways Institute,<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>    </span>1999.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>This book,
little more than a pamphlet, seeks to describe the Chinese notion of Qi and the
Western scientific data that validates it. He explains that Chinese do not see
Qi as a substance: “but rather, as the essence of life, the bridge of
consciousness between mind and body, and ‘the eternal now’ in which all
activity occurs” (4). This does suggest a field. The most critical passage of
the book, in terms of our thesis, refers to the measurement of the magnetic
fields of the human heart and brain. This research was done at <st1:place><st1:PlaceName>Syracuse</st1:PlaceName>
 <st1:PlaceType>University</st1:PlaceType></st1:place> in 1963 and through the
use of a highly sensitive superconducting magnetometer, which he says showed
that the magnetic field of the heart was 100 times stronger than that of the
brain (12), validating the Olson notion, in my view, that the heart is an
integral factor in the power of Projective Verse.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Olson, Charles.&nbsp;&nbsp; <span class=GramE><i>Human
Universe</i>.</span> (<i>Collected Prose</i>)&nbsp; <st1:City><st1:place>Berkeley</st1:place></st1:City>:&nbsp;
<st1:State><st1:place>California</st1:place></st1:State> Press,&nbsp;&nbsp;
1997.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>In this
essay, perhaps his most influential after Projective Verse, Olson makes a
distinction between the abstraction enabled by language since 450 A.D., or the
time of Socrates and the Human Universes of the <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>experience </i>of the human organism and that of his environment. He
suggests the distinction is between “<i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>language
as the act of the instant” </i>as opposed to what he sees as part of the
problem with literature and culture in general, and that being “language as the
act of thought about the instant” (156). Because of this tendency toward
generalizing and abstraction the problems with literature are similar to the
other specializations we have in Western culture, exacerbated with Newton and
Descartes, that being modes of writing that only incorporate a plane, a part of
the whole. Olson says: “It comes out a demonstration, a separating out, an act
of classification, and so…it has turned false” (157). Olson believes the
language of abstraction has allowed this. </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>He follows
up his assertion from “Projective Verse” by stating form is not isolated from
content, suggesting: </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>“The error of all other metaphysic is
descriptive, is the profound error that Heisenberg had the intelligence to
admit in his principle that a thing can be measured in its mass only by
arbitrarily assuming a stopping of its motion, or in its motion only by
neglecting, for the moment of its measuring, its mass. And either way, you are
failing to get what you are after – so far as a human being goes, his life.
There is only one thing you can do about kinetic, re-enact it. Which is why the
man said, he who possesses rhythm possess the universe. And why art is the only
twin life has – its only valid metaphysic. And if man is to once more to
possess intent in his life, and to take up the responsibility in his life, he
has to comprehend his own process as intact, from outside, by way of his skin,
in, and by his own powers of conversion, out again” (162). </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'>Olson in this essay, again shows that in
Western culture, the advances of 20<sup>th</sup> century physics and the cosmology
of Whitehead are a necessary shift for the culture to embrace to advance beyond
the competition/domination model that so cripples the evolution of the species.
His studies of Mayan culture are an attempt to illustrate his point and
constitute the final three pages of the essay. “Human Universe” is a critical
companion to “Projective Verse” which serves as a guide to those seeking <span
class=GramE>an</span> holistic approach to writing and allow the practitioner
to take responsibility for his or her own process of evolution.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Olson, Charles.&nbsp;&nbsp; <span class=GramE><i>The Maximus
Poems</i>.</span>&nbsp;&nbsp; <st1:City><st1:place>Berkeley</st1:place></st1:City>:&nbsp;
<st1:State><st1:place>California</st1:place></st1:State> Press,&nbsp;&nbsp;
1983.</p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>This is
Olson’s life work, which must be placed alongside William Carlos William’s epic
“</span><st1:City><st1:place><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>Paterson</span></st1:place></st1:City><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>” and Ezra Pound’s “The Cantos” in
terms of its significance to North American and world literature. Olson began
composing this poem after he established a process for use in creating a poetry
with more force (energy) than poetry as it was being written after the
abstraction of language (&amp; thought) as discussed above. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>In his “Guide
to the Maximus Poems,” George <span class=SpellE>Butterick</span> suggests this
is more than a poem that includes history, that the form of “The Maximus Poems”
is <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>the act </i>of history. In this act of
history, Olson reveals his cosmology as his poetics. In the process view of
reality, it is the act of writing as an enactment and not a description, as he
says in the essay “Human Universe.” What he creates with “The Maximus Poems” is
a stance toward reality that values community, or in his words the “Polis,”
over profits, and the redemption of <span class=SpellE>pejorocracy</span> or a worsening
of government rule aided by a popular or commercial culture that deadens the
senses:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>By
ear, he <span class=SpellE><span class=GramE>sd</span></span>.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>But
that which matters, that which insists, that which will last,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>that</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>! <span
class=GramE>o</span> my people, where shall you find it, how, where, where
shall you listen<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>when</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> all
is become billboards, when, all, even silence, is spray-gunned?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>when</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> even
our bird, my roofs,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>cannot</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> be
heard<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>when</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> even
you, when sound itself, is <span class=SpellE>neoned</span> in? (6)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>Olson tries to make his point against
<span class=SpellE>pejorocracy</span> by invoking the Greek goddess of victory
known as Nike, but ironically, the advertisements by the gym shoe manufacturer of
the same name at once lessen the impact of his point, and prove it. Central to
my line of inquiry, is the poem:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Letter
2<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>…..tell
you? <span class=GramE>ha</span>! <span class=GramE>who</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>can</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> tell
another how<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>to</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> manage
the swimming?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>he</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'> was
right: people<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>don’t</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>
change. They only stand more<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>revealed</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>.
I,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>likewise</span></span><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>
(9)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>This is central because for Olson,
the writing of the poem is the process that reveals one’s true self, that helps
to build a soul, but one has to be open to the non-linear and learn how to
trust the sound of the poem as it is sung in one’s head. It is a task that takes
tremendous courage, perhaps more than Olson had himself by the end of his life.
It is a process antithetical to a dominant culture in which even most poets
define themselves with a product mentality: publications, awards, etc. and the
situation has only intensified and gained tremendous velocity since Olson died
in 1970. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>In another strong poem Olson again
restates his theme of getting beyond the cosmology of competition:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>Maximus to </span><st1:City><st1:place><span
  style='font-size:12.0pt'>Gloucester</span></st1:place></st1:City><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>, Letter 27 [withheld]<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>I come back to the geography of it,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>the</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> land falling off to the left<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>where</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> my father shot his scabby golf<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>and</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> the rest of us played baseball <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>into</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> the summer darkness until no flies <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>could</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> be seen and we came home<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>to</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> our various piazzas where the women<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>buzzed</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>To the left the land fell to the city,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>to</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> the right it fell to the sea<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>I was so young my first memory<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>is</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> of a tent spread to feed lobsters<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>to</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> <span class=SpellE>Rexall</span> conventioneers, and
my father,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>a</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> man for kicks, came out of the tent roaring<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>with</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> a bread-knife in his teeth to take care of<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>a</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> druggist they’d told him had made a pass at<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>my</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> mother, she laughing, so sure, as round<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>as</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> her face, Hines pink and apple<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>under</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> one of those frame hats women then<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>This, is no bare incoming<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>of</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> novel abstract form, this<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>is</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> no welter or the forms<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>of</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> those events, this,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>Greeks, is the stopping<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>of</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> the battle<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>               
</span>It is the imposing<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>of</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> all those antecedent <span class=SpellE>predecessions</span>,
the precessions<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>of</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> me, the generation of those facts<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>which</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> are my words, it is coming<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>from</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> all that I no longer am, yet am,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>the</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> slow westward motion of <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>more</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> than I am<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>There is no strict personal order<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>for</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'> my inheritance.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                       
</span>No Greek will be able<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>to</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> discriminate my body.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                          </span>An American<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>is</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> a complex of occasions,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>themselves</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> a geometry<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>of</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> spatial nature.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>           </span>I have this sense,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>that</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> I am one<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>with</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> my skin<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>              </span>Plus this – plus this:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>that</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> forever the geography<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>which</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> leans in<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>on</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> me I compel<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>backwards</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> I compel </span><st1:City><st1:place><span
  style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>Gloucester</span></st1:place></st1:City><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>to</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> yield, to<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>change</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>            </span>Polis<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
150%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'>is</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%'> this<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt'>(185)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>A strong emotional current comes up
near the end of the poem, which also happened to be near the end of Olson’s
life. In an untitled poem, the daily disappearance of the sun inspires:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>Sun<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:1.0in'><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>right
in my eye<br>
4 PM <span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>December 2<sup>nd</sup> <span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>arrived<br>
at my kitchen<br>
window blazing<br>
at me full in the<br>
face approaching<br>
the hill it sets <br>
behind glaring<br>
in its burst of late<br>
heat right on me<br>
and as orange and hot<br>
as sun at noonday practically<br>
can be. Only this one<br>
is straight at me like a<br>
beam shot to hit me<br>
It feels like<br>
enforcing itself<br>
on me giving me its<br>
message that it is sliding<br>
under the hill and<br>
that I better<br>
hear it say<br>
be hot man<br>
be hot<br>
be hot and orange<br>
like I am<br>
I am<br>
sending you<br>
this message as<br>
I slip exactly to<br>
West I am burning you man<br>
as I leave I’m even stronger<br>
now just as I<br>
go I am already<br>
cooled that much but still<br>
I turn on you<br>
and flare<br>
as I start to<br>
go. <span class=GramE>But still<br>
hot and red now blaring<br>
on the slope of my disappearance<br>
point.</span><br>
Now I begin to<br>
go hear me I<br>
have sent you<br>
the message I am<br>
gone<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>        </span>(577)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>And the emotion in a poem, with too
complicated a format to recreate here, chronicles a part of his history and
love for his father. (495)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Olson was so
committed to his process that many poems are nothing more than notes, or
jottings, which for the typical poet would amount to materials that might <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>end up </i>in a poem. It is ALL in “The
Maximus Poems,” including <span class=SpellE>Whiteheadian</span> cosmology,
Algonquin Indian myths retold and other mythology, but to what effect? In a
work cited earlier, Robin Blaser suggests that “The Maximus Poems” was
unfinished, with Olson needing an extra ten years to do it justice. Of course,
one would suggest an Open Form poem is never complete, only stopped when the
author dies. The end of the poem gives us a clue as to what the end was like
for Olson:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in;line-height:
200%'><span class=GramE><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>my</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'> wife<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>    </span>my car<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   
</span>my color<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>and<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>myself<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>which</span></span><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'> suggests Olson did not reach the
humility he suggested in Projective Verse was necessary to make one of use. He,
at the end, was focused on that which he had lost, not what he had gained. If
he did indeed “sacrifice every thing, including sex and woman / – or lost them
–to this attempt to acquire complete / concentration” (473) then he may have
still been based in a Newtonian/Cartesian notion of limitation and not in the
paradigm of process and abundance which, ironically, his work continues to
foster. But he did sense the direction in which we, as a culture, need(<span
class=GramE>ed</span>) to aim, and the notions of process, polis and ‘<span
class=SpellE>istorin</span> – finding out for one’s self – are powerful
literary and soul-building tools sharpened by the man who ushered in the
post-modern era in literature and used to their best advantage yet in this epic
poem.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText><span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoFootnoteText style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
line-height:200%'>Olson, Charles.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><span
class=GramE><u>The Special View of History</u><i style='mso-bidi-font-style:
normal'>.</i></span><i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span></i></span><st1:City><st1:place><span
  style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>Berkeley</span></st1:place></st1:City><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:200%'>:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span>Oyez,<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>    </span>1970.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>This is the
second part of the philosophical one-two punch that Olson began with his
seminal essay Projective Verse. In that essay he made note of a “stance toward
reality” which brings such verse into being. In this document he expands on
what that stance is, developed at <st1:place><st1:PlaceName>Black</st1:PlaceName>
 <st1:PlaceType>Mountain</st1:PlaceType> <st1:PlaceType>College</st1:PlaceType></st1:place>
where the bulk of his most important thinking was apparently done.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>He has two
epigraphs to set the tone, one from <span class=SpellE>Heraclitus</span>: “Man
is estranged from that which is most familiar” and the Keats quote on Negative
Capability: “that is when man is capable of being in uncertainties, Mysteries,
doubts, without any irritable reaching after fact and reason…” (14) He likens
Negative Capability to the Einstein’s notion of Relativity and suggests it is a
stance in opposition to Power. That power would seem to me to be similar to
what David Hawkins calls Force, which stems from the Newtonian/ Cartesian need
to control or dominate.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Olson
suggests: “…history is the <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>function</i>
of any one of us” (17) and is a tool for use, that it not have us “by the
throat” as he reminds us Mussolini said when the Allied troops landed at <span
class=SpellE>Anzio</span> in World War II. He also cites <span class=SpellE>Herotodus</span>
as using history as a verb and translating that as meaning: “To find out for <span
class=GramE>yourself</span>” (26).</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Olson does
go on a bit about how: “…life is the chance success of a play of creative
accidents. It is the principle of randomness seen in its essential application,
not in any serial order imposed at random on either chance or accident…but in
the factual observation of how creation does occur: by the success of its own
accident” (48). The advances in Field Theory, as I have cited before through
Sheldrake and Hawkins, suggest that fields attract like energies, so that it is
not the random at play, but attractor fields, though they may seem random at
first blush.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Olson uses
Whitehead’s concept of prehension, both negative and positive, along with
Einstein’s use of coincidence and proximity to explain, somewhat torturously
that man’s order are “no longer separable from either those of nature, or of
God. The organic is one, purpose is seen to be contingent, not primordial: it
follows from the chance success of the play of creative accident <span
class=GramE>“ (</span>or of attractor fields) “it does not precede them. <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>The motive, then, of reality, is process,
not goal” </i>(49). <span class=GramE>(My emphasis.)</span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>There is one
other passage which I find quite clear and fascinating: “The tenses… of the
mythological are never past, but present and future…” (22). </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Summarized,
Olson’s <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Special View of History </i>suggests
history is not something you’re stuck with, but something you can, and must,
use to find out for yourself who you are and how you fit in to whatever
tradition/lineage/calling you’re summoned to, and how you act with that
knowledge.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Paul, Sherman.&nbsp;&nbsp; <i>Olson’s Push</i>.&nbsp;&nbsp; <st1:City><st1:place><span
  class=GramE>Baton Rouge</span></st1:place></st1:City><span class=GramE>;&nbsp;&nbsp;
LSU Press,&nbsp;&nbsp; 1978.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>In this
excellent introduction to Olson’s work, Paul examines Olson’s relations to
elder poets, especially Pound, Eliot and Williams and also demonstrates a keen
knowledge of some of the components of Olson’s stance which make it so
visionary. The first I find worth commenting on is the notion of the nexus of
history, process and feedback. Paul says Olson wishes:</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'><span class=GramE>…not to transcend
history…but enter it and use it.</span> This is possible because history for
him is not “accumulation, but change.”</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>History is not simple addition, the merely
linear causality assumed by those who read its course as inevitable decline and
accordingly prefer the past to the present, a view Pound expresses in <i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>Hugh Selwyn <span class=SpellE>Mauberly</span>:<o:p></o:p></i></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span
style='mso-tab-count:2'>                        </span>All things are a flowing,<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span
style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span
class=GramE>sage</span> <span class=SpellE>Heracleitus</span> says;<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span
style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>But
a tawdry cheapness<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-tab-count:2'>                        </span><span
style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span><span class=GramE>Shall outlast our
days.</span><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>On the contrary, since history is process
it course is never single, never inevitable, never foreclosed. Process opens
possibility, and history is always prospective, never limited by origin, which,
in any case, may be recovered…spatially, in the fullness of time. This is what
feed-back proves and why Olson considers it “the law” of history…feedback…is a
means of correction, the use of knowledge of past events to foster change in an
ongoing process… (22/3).</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Here Paul demonstrates why Pound is Modern and Olson
Post-Modern. Olson grasped the advances in quantum physics and the cosmology
that was sympathetic to those findings to move beyond where Pound was even
while utilizing the best of Pound’s advances in poetics. </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Paul also
extends the interesting last point we made about Olson’s Special View of
History above, that being the present. Olson’s notion of the present, Paul suggests:
“…is the present world, the actual familiar world of things from which…we have
long been estranged; it is also presence. <span class=GramE>The present is a
“human universe,” the possibility opened again by modern science…and confirmed
for him …by extant ways of the Mayas” (33).</span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>On
Projective Verse, Paul again shows a deep understanding of its merits:
“Projective Verse is not only a poetics of presentation, but a poetics of
present experience, of enactment. It replaces <span class=SpellE>spectatorism</span>
with participation, and brings the whole self – the single intelligence: body,
mind, <span class=GramE>soul</span> – to the activity of creation. Dance …is a
correlative of this poetics; and so are action painting and jazz, which poets
at this time turned to because they offered the instruction they wanted. “There
was no poetic,’ Olson says of this time. ‘It was Charlie Parker.’ Charlie
Parker reminds us that Olson, more than any of his predecessors stresses
breath” (39).</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Of
Whitehead, which there is much of use in this work, Paul reminds us that an:
“…actual entity…becomes itself by prehending other objects” (126) among other
notions. Paul knows, as Olson does, that the key to survival of the species is
an open, matriarchal, consciousness, beyond <span class=SpellE>dominism</span>
and the restraints of the Newtonian/Cartesian paradigm. With that Paul, quoting
Olson, says in the epilogue: “’man is either going to rediscover the earth, or
leave it’” (253).</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'>Ray, Paul, Anderson, Sherry.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span><span class=GramE><u>The Cultural <span class=SpellE>Creatives</span></u><i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>.</i></span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>Harmony:<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  
</span><st1:State><st1:place>New York</st1:place></st1:State>,<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span>2000.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   
</span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Based on
research done for corporations to better market products, this book is an
incredible resource for people who feel alienated by dominant culture values
and don’t feel as if their own values are shared by other people. These people
are one of the three subcultures Ray and Anderson began to recognize after 13
years of market research on the values of American consumers. The three
subcultures are: “<span class=SpellE>Traditionals</span>,” which is described
as a group of people who tend to lean backward with their worldview and live in
reaction to the Modern, secular worldview; the “Moderns,” a group with a life
stance of Standing Pat with the status quo; and the “Cultural <span
class=SpellE>Creatives</span>,” or the planet’s new counterculture, with a life
stance of leaning forward and using feedback to go beyond the worldview of the
Moderns. They suggest the birth of this new subculture happened about the time
of the founding of <span class=SpellE>Esalen</span>, an educational center for
the exploration of human potential founded in <st1:State><st1:place>California</st1:place></st1:State>
in 1962. The authors believe that once “Cultural <span class=SpellE>Creatives</span>”
recognize how many people share their world view, which I would suggest is
holistic and <span class=SpellE>organismic</span>, then powerful change through
market forces and the systems it <span class=GramE>effects</span>, will be
possible.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span class=SpellE>Saffo</span>, David.<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><u>Charles Olson, Martin Heidegger, and
Ontic Immediacy: a <o:p></o:p></u></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=GramE><u>Phenomenological
Interpretation of poem-in-the-world.</u></span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>Hangman #4 </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><a
href="http://www.ovf.com/ha/h-ngm-n/429.htm">http://www.ovf.com/ha/h-ngm-n/429.htm</a></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span
class=SpellE>Saffo</span> uses Martin <span class=SpellE>Heidigger’s</span>
notion of <span class=SpellE>Da-Sein</span> (there-being) as the mind and the
object (or situation) as a unified phenomenon and that the poetics of Charles
Olson parallel Heidegger’s theory of “a unitary phenomenology” (1). Quoting
from Olson’s essays: “Human Universe,” “The Special View of History,” and
“Projective Verse,” the last of which demonstrates his great understanding of the
key to Olson’s poetics. He suggests: “one way Olson finds to guard against the
habit of descriptive discourse is to mimic the body’s biological process of
rapid apperception” and goes on to say: “Thus his poetic discourages interference
from the ego-subject of the poem, and stresses reliance on the object’s (or
situation’s) existence. A ‘being-in-the-world’ interacting with an object may
enact the experience with a ‘poem-in-the-world.’” Thus changing the poetics of
an individual also changes the individual’s philosophical stance toward reality
as well. Olson places importance on the actual object and not the individual’s
description of it.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'>I have not yet
seen a better understanding of why Olson’s poetics work so well to allow content
to change in the projective act, deepening the practitioner’s experience of
being, which <span class=SpellE>Saffo</span> calls: “Ontic Immediacy,” “which
stresses the role of the body’s senses—always already measuring the degree and
duration of each stimulus—as the foundation of the being’s intellectual and
emotional present.”</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span class=SpellE>Upledger</span>, John.&nbsp;&nbsp; <span
class=GramE><i>Cell Talk.</i></span>&nbsp;&nbsp; <st1:City><st1:place>Berkeley</st1:place></st1:City>:&nbsp;
<st1:place>North Atlantic</st1:place>,&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 2003.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>In many ways
this is a delightful book, especially the anecdotes, but in other ways a book
too difficult to read for someone without extensive knowledge of physical human
systems. <span class=SpellE>Upledger</span> is best known for the creation of a
system of healing known as “Cranial Sacral Therapy,” which uses light touch to
first connect with and then manipulate spinal fluids to aid a homeostatic
process of healing by releasing emotional traumas. I especially resonated with
the authors’ concepts regarding the experiential nature of consciousness and
the inability to use Newtonian science to prove the nature of consciousness.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
class=GramE>von</span> Hallberg, Robert.&nbsp;&nbsp; <i>Charles Olson: The
Scholar’s Art.&nbsp;&nbsp; </i><st1:City><st1:place>Cambridge</st1:place></st1:City>:&nbsp;
Harvard </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in'>University Press,<span class=GramE>&nbsp; 1978</span>.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>This
work focuses primarily on the poetic theories of Charles Olson, done by a
writer who recognizes the critical nature of Olson’s contribution in that area
of North American literature. <span class=GramE>von</span> Hallberg recognizes
that Olson’s placed emphasis not only on the content of his poetry, but also
the way language “under the control of a system with its own dynamics – shapes
the subject matter” (22). Again we are reminded of how Olson said in “Projective
Verse” how the content does change in this system of poem-making. von Hallberg
also recognizes the participatory nature of Olson’s poetics in which the poem
is not something one reflects on as much as engages with, inviting response and
how Olson veils statements made in his work and that this: “apparent obscurity
demands participation” (32). </p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>The
main facet of Olson’s connection to Whitehead and <span class=SpellE>Heraclitus</span>
is in his belief, confirmed by these philosophers: “…that reality is an
unceasing process which undermines all static achievements. Hence, all
preconceived forms…all closure, is unfaithful to reality. Olson engaged this
mater in moral terms: in order to fulfill its moral obligation, art must commit
itself – no matter the painful uncertainty – to process, to open form.” And von
Hallberg recognizes this commitment to the unknown: “<span class=GramE>..encourages</span>
repetition, parenthesis, and apposition. Because nothing can be stated exactly
and finally, one must try to say something once, be dissatisfied at the incompleteness
of expression, try to say it again more completely, be again dissatisfied, and
so on, in theory at least, ad infinitum” or until death ends the process (72).
With that in mind, von Hallberg understands that The Maximus Poems are not “the
result” of Olson’s labors, “they are his labors” (73).</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>In
von <span class=SpellE>Hallberg’s</span> section focusing specifically on
Whitehead’s philosophy and how it influenced Olson, we get this key bit:</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:1.0in;line-height:200%'>Each actual
entity is, in Whitehead’s system, a process, first a process of becoming itself
and then of becoming every other actual entity. According to his interpretation
of the theory of relativity, no two actual entities are unrelated; each actual
entity ‘feels’ every other actual entity. His term for this ‘feeling’ is
prehension. One actual entity can prehend another positively or negatively: if
positively, one actual entity transmits itself – and thereby extends its life –
to another; if negatively, Whitehead would say that one actual entity ‘decides’
not to feel the other actual entity, not to form itself out of the energy of
the other. The peak of the process of concrescence – the point at which the
actual entity has become itself but has not yet dissolved into other actual
entities – he terms “satisfaction” (86)</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>In this
quote we see part the source for “Projective Verse.” I am thinking about the line:
“But if he stays inside himself and is contained within his nature as he as
participant in the larger force, he will be able to listen, and his hearing
through himself will give him <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>secrets
objects share</i>” (Olson Collected Prose 247, emphasis mine). What is omitted
from the content? Those things which are eliminated are done so, in Whitehead
parlance, through <i style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'>negative prehension</i>,
which can be described as intelligence. Does this mean that the evil is left
out of the poem? No, but I think the manner in which it is handled. Does the
evil consume one, <span class=GramE>our allow</span> the practitioner to fall
into the trap of being governed by what disturbs him? I think the projective
act takes us to deeper levels of understanding, or meaning, of being.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>Further
along with von <span class=SpellE>Hallberg</span> and again in the realm of
Whitehead we see the further definition of reality, which Olson understood and
incorporated into his concept of poem-making and of being: “Action and motion,
in Whitehead’s philosophy, supplant the Aristotelian concept of matter as
substance; in Whitehead’s system there is no such animal as a thing…” Whitehead
and quantum physics, conceive of a thing itself as what it does and von <span
class=SpellE>Hallberg</span> suggests: “At the center of the object, therefore,
is no nucleus of tangibility, but instead a system of relationships” (96). The
notion that inside an atom is a lot of space has been confirmed by quantum
physics, and thousands of years before by Taoists. <span class=GramE>von</span>
<span class=SpellE>Hallberg</span> also points out Whitehead’s notion, endorsed
by Olson, of concrescence, in which the past is alive in the present, but the
present is not a dilution of the past: “…because the process of concrescence
includes an element of novelty that can make for progress” (103). Also in this
section von <span class=SpellE>Hallberg</span> points out the difference in
worldview between T.S. Eliot and his source in <span class=SpellE>Spengler</span>
and Whitehead (Olson’s chief philosophical source) which is quite relevant to
our mode of inquiry, seeing that Eliot’s view is bleak, while Olson’s is more
hopeful, but the Olson poem “The Kingfishers” states Olson’s take on that
better than I can here.</p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='mso-tab-count:1'>            </span>There is so
much to comment on, because von <span class=SpellE>Hallberg’s</span>
scholarship combined with his understanding of Olson’s contribution, is
remarkable. He even understands that, though Olson in “Projective Verse” speaks
of “<span class=SpellE>humilitas</span>,” “…he is humble only when he takes the
part of the documenter” (198). <o:p></o:p></p>

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