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<p class=MsoEndnoteText align=center style='text-align:center;line-height:150%'><b
style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span style='font-size:12.0pt;line-height:
150%'>Inside Dolphin Skull<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
In his seminal post-modern essay “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Projective
Verse</span>,” Charles Olson suggests that the “stance toward reality that
brings such verse into being” is a change “larger than the technical” and may
“lead to new poetics and new concepts from which some…epic may …emerge” (Olson
239). Surely the epic Olson had in mind was something along the lines of his
own <span class=SpellE><i>Maximus</i></span>, or perhaps Robert Duncan’s <i>Ground
Work</i>, yet no projective poem has the force of this <span class=SpellE>organismic</span>
worldview, with a myriad-mindedness, consistent energy and literary skill, more
than Michael McClure’s “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin
Skull,”</span> his long projective poem published in 1995. At sixty-six pages,
it cannot be seriously considered an epic poem, though it does have the history
and culture of post-World War II America all over it. Yet the poem certainly is
the pinnacle of projection as far as 20<sup>th</sup> century poetry is
concerned due to the consistently high level of consciousness it enacts in the
reader open enough to take it in. “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Perhaps
it will please someone else and they may appropriate it for their own
consciousness.” <span style='mso-tab-count:1'>      </span></span>(71).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
Michael McClure was born in <st1:City w:st="on">Marysville</st1:City>, <st1:State
w:st="on">Kansas</st1:State> on October 20, 1932, but grew up in <st1:place
w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Seattle</st1:City></st1:place> and expected to be
a naturalist. It didn’t exactly work out that way after he attended a poetry
workshop given by Robert Duncan in the early ‘50s in <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City
 w:st="on">San Francisco</st1:City></st1:place>, but science was to be a huge
source for McClure. After all, how many poets get blurbs from people like
Francis <span class=GramE>Crick:</span> <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
margin-left:.5in'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I love the
vividness of his reactions and the very personal turns and swirls of the lines.
The worlds in which I myself live, the private world of personal reactions, the
biological world (animals and plants and even bacteria chase each other through
the poems), the world of the atom and molecule, the stars and the galaxies, are
all there; and in between, above and below, stands man, the howling mammal,
contrived out of &quot;meat&quot; by chance and necessity. If I were a poet I
would write like Michael McClure-if only I had his talent. (Crick) <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Crick won a Nobel
Prize for his investigation into the structure of the DNA molecule, the double
helix. McClure understands the intersection of poetry and science perhaps
better than anyone ever has, but says if either is not used to “change one’s
life they are meaningless” (McClure xvi). McClure states this in the author’s
preface to <i>Three Poems,</i> the book in which “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>Dolphin Skull”<i> </i></span>was first published. It is one of the most
succinct, clear and knowledgeable statements on projective verse ever, clearly
showing with the enclosed poems, that McClure is the prime projective
practitioner. Yet his is an art discipline that amounts to the practice of
consciousness science, and his work radiates stronger energy fields as his
career continues, demonstrating the success of his “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>experiment in soul-building”<i> </i></span>as Keats might call it. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;<span
style='mso-tab-count:1'>           </span>While the non-linear (chaotic?)
nature of projective verse can be obtuse to some, the best advice for its
appreciation is McClure’s suggestion that: “What is urgent is not the <i>quantity</i>
that is understood as one reads a poem, but how much one uses the richness of
one’s being to have the experience of the poem” (McClure xvi). As a projective
poet for over half a century, he understands that: “To write spontaneously does
not mean to write carelessly or without thought and deep experience. In fact,
there must be a vision and a poetics that are alive and conscious…When the poem
is finished I listen to it…and see that it has a deeper consciousness and
brighter thoughts than I was aware of while writing.” (xv). This fact is what
the poet writing in the projective (open, organic) will, over time, come to
understand, trust and develop, yet it is also what makes writing projectively
very difficult. Vision and rigorous discipline rarely come easily. When the
writer composing organically is in the flow (when she is tapped-in), there is a
consciousness available at a deeper level. It is similar to the practice of the
jazz soloist, the action painter, the calligrapher or the experience of any
number of other spontaneous art form practitioners. They are lost in the moment
of the creative act. McClure has so perfected his craft that he has access to
myriad deep fields of resonance which inform his poems like few others writing
in post-World War II North America. It is the long practice of the projective,
combined with the poet’s talent and the power of the fields, including the
ultimate field, the collective unconscious into which he taps, which accounts
for the power behind this poem and the best of McClure’s work.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:
auto;text-align:center;line-height:150%'><b style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>A Personal Universe<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
In a lecture given at the <span class=SpellE>Naropa</span> Institute on July
17, 1976, McClure gave students the rules for constructing a <i>personal
universe deck.</i> This deck was to be the personal universe of willing
participants signified in one hundred words. The rules included that words
chosen for each student’s deck exemplify the past, present and future of the
student, that they sound good together, that they show the bad side of the
student as well as those words coming from “your angel-food self” (<span
class=medium-normal>Waldman, Webb</span> 89). All but one of these words <span
class=GramE>were</span> to be concrete and to be evenly divided between the
five senses. Of course this process is steeped in the Ezra Pound–William Carlos
Williams <span class=GramE>school</span> of imagism, but the notion of
constructing cards to create a personal universe also gets the student
practitioner into the realm of personal mythology, a deep level of
consciousness. The opening lines of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin
Skull”</span> are certainly taken from McClure’s personal universe and they
show, from the very beginning of this poem, the power and consciousness of his
craft:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:
auto;text-align:center'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>SO THE OWL
HOOTS: Turquoise.&nbsp;&nbsp; <span class=GramE>Musk.</span>&nbsp;&nbsp; <span
class=GramE>White linen.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:
auto;text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Deer
in the yard – a stag with antlers.</span></span><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>
(3)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:
auto;text-align:center'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>There is so much
in these first two lines. The first thing one notices is that all but one of
the five senses <span class=GramE>are</span> immediately engaged and the fifth,
taste (in the image of blackberries) is not too far away. <span class=GramE>So,
on to the depth of McClure’s personal mythological universe.</span> The owl is
seen in many cultures as a harbinger of death. In American Indian culture it
also evokes wisdom and divination (Cooper 124). Of course something must first
die so that the energy can be transformed. Death/Rebirth is one of the seven
basic archetypes (Williams 271) and this is where McClure begins his own
journey. Turquoise is another image which evokes Native America. It is also
associated with a definition of spiritual health and well-being (Rain 619), as
well as with the throat, or communication chakra (Martin 40). In fact, Joseph
Martin suggests it increases energy levels, enhances connections to spirit
energy, and keeps one open and alert or as he says: “keeps your body in a
‘ready to move state’” (40). Musk evokes the sense of smell, something we get
over and over in the poem, from the <span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>smell
of mackerel baking</span> to <span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>the
leaves and odors of Vietnamese basil </span>to the <span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>smell of the pot roast and the noodles.</span> This last image comes
after the line “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>I/ have/ blown up<span
class=GramE>!/</span> Blown up and cooked myself over a fire” (10).</span> So
the notion of death/rebirth not only starts the poem, but is a key theme. But
we are only on line one, with musk, which “connotes a down to earth
personality; one close to the earth; possessing primal (basic) spiritual
beliefs without superficiality” (Rain 396). The last of the first four senses
engaged, “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>White linen<i>,</i>”<i> </i></span>evokes
another key theme of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin Skull</span>,”
sensuality. There are many passages which are quite sexy and McClure’s
sensuality is part of the fire that underlies the potency of this poem. One
such passage suggests, in McClure’s unique typography:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>COVERS<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>OF OLD MAGAZINES<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>are</span></span><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'> glossy, erotic, my<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>sexuality</span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>grows</span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'> underneath them<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>like</span></span><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'> a rock rolled up on a beach<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>by</span></span><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'> the edge of huge waves.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I’M<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>LISTENING<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>to</span></span><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'> you in my mind.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   
</span>A MUSEUM OF DIRTY PICTURES (15)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Yet McClure’s
passion is a <span class=SpellE>bloodfire</span> tempered by the wisdom of
experience. Later in the book we get a sense of his early sensual life in the
poem “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dark Brown”</span> which has a
graphic description of <span class=SpellE>analingus</span> decades before
anyone put ads in the local alternative weekly seeking <i>rimming</i>. But at
only the end of the third stanza of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin
Skull,”<i> </i></span>he likens the sexual addiction of his young manhood to a
CRUCIFIXION and gives us the capital letters to drive home his point. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
So in this poem we will have a DEATH/REBIRTH, done with a spiritual health and
well-being that suggests we be ready to move along with some unpretentious
spiritual beliefs into something that feels very good. This is what is evoked
in line <i>one</i>. In line two there is a deer in the yard. But not just any
deer, “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>a stag with antlers.”</span> Of
course there is the immediate connection with nature, even though this nature
is only <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Oakland</st1:City>, <st1:State
 w:st="on">California</st1:State></st1:place>. Yet, in the <st1:City w:st="on">Oakland</st1:City>
hills, McClure is aware of deer mingling with stellar jays, red tail hawks and
other critters, so there is more than one might think when we visualize <st1:place
w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Oakland</st1:City></st1:place>. But the stag
connotes the solar, renewal, creation, fire, the dawn, virility. The stag
trampling the serpent suggests the power of good over evil, of spirit over
matter but dualism wouldn’t likely be McClure’s intention. In fact, later in
the poem a rattlesnake is trampled, by the <i>pony of memory.</i> The stag also
represents: “…a personal choice to accomplish something by one’s self” (Cooper
158).<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>  </span>This is again amplified by one of
the most beautiful lines in the poem: “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Breaking
up rainbows of agonies into actions” (11). </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'> </span><span class=GramE>But on to the last of the
five senses, taste.</span> Blackberries are another thematic element in “<span
style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin Skull”</span> but are also one of
McClure’s personal mythological symbols. He once released a book of poems
entitled <i>September Blackberries. </i>Now we’ve all seen images of old cars
in the slow process of becoming dirt through the tendrils of blackberry vines
looping through the broken windows, so we can imagine blackberries as a symbol
of regeneration, or as Seattle poet Paul Hunter put it “infiltrating and
turning to sweet fruit/whatever we abandon or neglect” (Hunter 4). It has
ancient magical connotations: “Powerful herb of protection and used in
invocations to the goddess Brigit, who presides over healing, poetry, sacred
wells, and <span class=SpellE>smithcraft</span>. Also used in wealth attracting
spells” (Barlow). <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
We’re only fourteen lines in and we’ve skipped over other powerful attractor
fields such as the ocean, aging, the dream realm and love. Yet there are at
least three other fields of energy expressed in the imagery of the first stanza
of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin Skull”</span> that deserve
examination. The first is from the line<i> “</i><span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>As I get huger I become streams / stretching into shadows of memories.”</span>
Yes, certainly memory is a powerful attractor field. The epigraph McClure uses
for the poem is a Lapp proverb that says: “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>The memories of one’s youth make for long <span class=SpellE>long</span>
thoughts” (3).</span> I asked him about the meaning of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>as I get huger”</span> and he suggested it was a state of
consciousness. Without further elucidation from the author this remains
somewhat mysterious and I am sure McClure does not have a problem with that
notion. There is hugeness in the consciousness of this poem and because of
McClure’s depth of experience, writing skill and process, he is able to bring
those who are open into that hugeness. The poem has transformative
capabilities. The second of the final three images of stanza one is blackness,
as in “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Blackness is just a mask of fat
for somebody” (4).</span> This is the second time in the book McClure evokes
the image of blackness, the first being the books’ epigraph “<span
style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Once this was all Black Plasma and
Imagination<span class=GramE>”(</span>vii)</span>. Black is, of course, not a
color, but the absence of reflected light, as we learned in grammar school
science. Yet it also is an archetypal strange attractor and a powerful one at
that. Think Black Holes. In McClure’s projective practice we can take black for
whatever it evokes in us, as his is a process which allows the reader equipped
with negative capability to draw their own conclusions. (You might counter that
all poetry is this way, but not all poetry is written from the state of
consciousness in which Negative Capability is at play. Language designed to
persuade is one sign that this element is missing, which is why poets Robert
Duncan and Jack Spicer could recognize the use of persuasive language as a
failing of the projective, or organic, impulse. ) <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>In
McClure’s universe, you can bet that black is the stage before something huge
begins to emerge. The final notion in stanza one is: “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>The clouds are alive” (4).</span> This can be seen simply as animism
(in itself not such a simple concept, but one ascribed to so-called<i>
primitive </i>cultures,) but in truth, it is where McClure lives, in the
crossroads where shamanism meets 20<sup>th</sup> century science. Everything IS
alive and it is another of the themes of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>Dolphin Skull</span>.” McClure abstains from the word <i>shaman</i>,
feeling it overused but does suggest everything has consciousness. Yet
McClure’s notion of consciousness is sourced in a very old world view not only
akin to the holistic stance toward reality Olson referenced in “<span
style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Projective Verse</span>,” alluded to at the
top of this essay, but one that may be traced through Olson’s source, Alfred
North Whitehead, to the cultures that were (and to some degree still are) much
more partial to the holistic/interconnected world view McClure references with
the above line and others from “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin
Skull</span>.”<i> </i>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:
auto;text-align:center;line-height:150%'><span class=SpellE><b
style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Hua</span></b></span><b
style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>-Yen
Buddhism: The Jewel Net of <span class=SpellE>Indra</span><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>One
of McClure’s source texts is Francis Cook’s book <span class=SpellE><i>Hua</i></span><i>-Yen
Buddhism</i> and <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen is mentioned as a source in the
introduction to <i>Three Poems</i>. It refers to a Chinese <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:PlaceType
 w:st="on">school</st1:PlaceType> of <st1:PlaceName w:st="on">Buddhism</st1:PlaceName></st1:place>
known as <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen or <i>Flower Ornament.</i>
&nbsp;Cook sets the context of the holistic/process orientation of this mode of
thinking when he points out that the “tendency in the West has been to analyze
rather than unify, to discriminate rather than see all as one, to make
distinctions rather than see all qualities within each datum of experience” and
that “people ordinarily think and experience in terms of distinct separate <i>entities</i>,
while <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen&nbsp;conceives of experience primarily
in terms of the <i>relationships</i> between these same entitie<span
class=MsoPageNumber>s.” He also points out Western p</span>hysicists have drawn
the conclusion that “relationship is the more fundamental” (Cook 8).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Michael
Faraday is credited with the early scientific work in Field theory, preceding<span
class=MsoPageNumber> the scientists to whom Cook refers and Faraday, working in
the 19<sup>th</sup> century, noted that “an electric charge must be considered
to exist everywhere.” Cook also points out that Whitehead paraphrased that by
saying: “the modification of the electromagnetic field at every point of space
at each instant owing to the past history of each electron is another way of
stating the same fact” (17). Here I am reminded of a section of the second part
of “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Dolphin Skull”</span> which is
entitled: <i>Portrait of the Moment:</i></span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=MsoPageNumber>Point Lobos as it always is<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                  
</span><span class=GramE>with</span> a whale skeleton<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                          
</span><span class=GramE>and</span> molecules <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=GramE><span class=MsoPageNumber>of</span></span><span
class=MsoPageNumber> Robinson Jeffers’<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=MsoPageNumber><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>           </span><span
class=GramE>breath</span> and shoe soles<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                               
</span><span class=GramE>looking</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                                             
</span><span class=GramE>up</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                              
</span><span class=GramE>out</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                          </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                 </span><span
class=GramE>of</span> my eyes<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><span
class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                            </span>(<span
class=GramE>sensing</span> back and outwards into<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                             
</span><span class=GramE>a</span> vision)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber><i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                    
</span></i><span class=GramE>at</span> the camera. (51)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span class=MsoPageNumber>The remnants of
the electrons that once made up the <st1:State w:st="on">California</st1:State>
poet to whom McClure refers, the field of energy that represents, along with
the sense of honoring the debt McClure owes to Jeffers as a <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State
 w:st="on">California</st1:State></st1:place> poet who preceded him, are
factors that give this reference strong energy. These events referenced in the
poem are enacted by the event of the poem itself in the projective act, and as
Whitehead understood, can and do inform events happening now. McClure
understands this on a deep level and that understanding is aligned with the <span
class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen cosmology where all things are important and
connected.</span><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span class=MsoPageNumber>Not only are there
no hierarchies in the <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen view, an emperor is as
important as a sand-flea, but the alternative name <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen
gave itself was “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>The Interdependent
Origination of the Universe,”</span> thus, according to this world-view,
everything is essentially empty, (as the quantum physicists of the 20<sup>th</sup>
Century began to realize) because everything depends on everything else for its
existence, two themes which McClure suggests in the following manner:</span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                         
</span>“Mind” means nothing but consciousness – <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                     
</span><span class=GramE>a</span> rock has it and a toadstool<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                        </span><span
class=GramE>and</span> a field of <span class=SpellE>subparticles</span> in a
complex protein<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                
</span><span class=GramE>as</span> it loops, tying a knot. A mouth<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                       
</span><span class=GramE>with</span> a cock in it. Babies<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                           </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span><span class=GramE>crying</span> in the next
room.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   </span>Blackberries<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                               
</span><span class=GramE>glisten</span> with it and the webs covered<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                              </span><span
class=GramE>with</span> dust and particles from car fumes<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                           </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>           </span><span class=GramE>and</span> the
pollen of eucalyptus. (27)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in'><span class=MsoPageNumber>And also:</span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                                                
</span>You are <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                                       
</span><span class=GramE>everyone</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                     </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                      </span>BUT<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                                   
</span>I am nobody.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                            
</span>Nobody is very large<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                   </span><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                        </span><span
class=GramE>and</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>                                                                      
</span><span class=GramE>powerful</span>.<span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>     
</span>(21)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>More
of the <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen worldview, intentionally or not, is
reflected in <i>Dolphin Skull</i> through the amazing imagery which reinforces
(or creates) the powerful energy at work in the poem. Cook suggests: <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>…the effort of
self-transcendence, by which egotism, pride and delusion are destroyed, is
accompanied by a parallel immersion even more deeply than before into the
concrete world of things. Rather than banish things as unworthy such a vision
reinstates the common and ordinary (as well as the “horrible” and “disgusting”)
to a position of ultimate value (88). <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>I’m
reminded of William Carlos Williams dictum: “n<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>o ideas but in things”</span> as well as his appreciating the old man
picking up dog lime in the gutter as much as the preacher at his pulpit. I am
also reminded of McClure’s references in the poem, admitting to being “sneaky
and proud” as well as his likening the small “s” self to a parasite as in “the
parasite of personality,” as well as unorthodox references to “cracker barrels
where the dog pissed” or “eyes of starving families,” or “a friend blown up in
a car wreck” (The friend in this case was Emmett Grogan of Diggers fame). <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Ultimately,
Cook suggests the function of <span class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen thought <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>…is to be a lure
which attracts the aspirant to the practice which will presumably culminate in
an <span class=GramE>existential,</span> or experiential validation of what was
before only theory. At the same time it guides the aspirant in actual
interrelationships, serving as a kind of template by means of which the
individual may gauge the extent to which his actions conform to the reality of
identity and interdependence (109).&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
text-indent:.5in;line-height:150%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>McClure
is successful, largely through his expertise at the projective practice, in
translating this kind of experience into verse. Poet and Grateful Dead lyricist
Robert Hunter points out in the introduction to <i>Three Poems</i> that McClure
“reports with …fastidious exactness” and that his objects (images) are “clear
and present” (McClure ix).&nbsp; In my view, <i>Dolphin Skull</i> is the
crowning achievement of a consciousness and practice which enacts one of the
most powerful attractor fields, that of compassion, which in the <span
class=SpellE>Hua</span> Yen view of things is “inextricably bound up with
perception” (121). It is for these reasons I feel that “<span style='mso-bidi-font-style:
italic'>Dolphin Skull”</span> will still resonate 1,000 years from now and so
far is the primary evidence that a projective practice leads to a deepening of
consciousness. One need only be interested in transcendence for the poem to
begin its magic of transformation, or as McClure said:<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>pretend</span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'> this is not blackness.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>This is not blackness, this<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><span style='mso-spacerun:yes'>   
</span><span class=GramE>is</span> a bell ring. (36)<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal align=center style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:
auto;text-align:center'><b style='mso-bidi-font-weight:normal'><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>WORKS CITED<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Barlow, Bernice. <span class=GramE>“Title.”</span>
&lt;http://pages.prodigy.net/groovyskye/2.html&gt;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-bidi-font-style:italic'>Barlow, Bernice, ed. “Llewellyn's 1999 Magical
Almanac.” </span><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on"><span
  style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>St. Paul</span></st1:City></st1:place><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>: Llewellyn, 1999.<span
style='mso-spacerun:yes'>       </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Cook, Francis. “<span
class=SpellE>Hua</span>-Yen Buddhism: The Jewel Net of <span class=SpellE>Indra</span>.”<i
style='mso-bidi-font-style:normal'> </i><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Delhi</st1:City></st1:place>:
Sri <span class=SpellE>Satguru</span>, 1994.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Cooper,
J.C.&nbsp;&nbsp;<span class=GramE>“An Illustrated Encyclopedia of Traditional
Symbols.”</span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">New
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Hunter,
Paul.&nbsp;<span class=GramE>“Ode to the Blackberry.”</span> <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City
 w:st="on">Seattle</st1:City></st1:place>:&nbsp;Wood Works,&nbsp;1996. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span class=medium-normal><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>McClure, Michael.&nbsp;<span class=GramE>“Three Poems.”</span>
<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State w:st="on">New York</st1:State></st1:place>:&nbsp;Penguin,
1995.</span></span><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span class=medium-normal><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>Olson, Charles.&nbsp;<span class=GramE>“Collected Prose.”</span>
<st1:City w:st="on">Berkeley</st1:City>:&nbsp;<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:State
 w:st="on">California</st1:State></st1:place>,&nbsp;1997.</span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span class=GramE><span class=medium-normal><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>Rain, Mary Summer.</span></span></span><span
class=medium-normal><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;“In Your
Dreams: The Ultimate Dream Directory.” <st1:City w:st="on">Charlottesville</st1:City>:&nbsp;&nbsp;
<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Hampton</st1:City></st1:place>
Roads,&nbsp;2004.</span></span><span style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span class=medium-normal><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>Waldman, Webb, eds. “Talking Poetics from <span
class=SpellE>Naropa</span> Institute.”&nbsp;<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City
 w:st="on">Boulder</st1:City></st1:place>:&nbsp;<span class=SpellE>Shambhala</span>,&nbsp;1978.</span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:-36.45pt;
mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span class=medium-normal><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>Williams, <span class=SpellE>Strephon</span> Kaplan.&nbsp;<span
class=GramE>“Jungian-<span class=SpellE>Senoi</span> <span class=SpellE>Dreamwork</span>
Manual.”</span>&nbsp;&nbsp;<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">Berkeley</st1:City></st1:place>:&nbsp;Journey,&nbsp;1980.</span></span><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>also</span></span><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'>, websites: <a
href="http://www.thing.net/~grist/l&amp;d/mcclure/mc-crick.htm">http://www.thing.net/~grist/l&amp;d/mcclure/mc-crick.htm</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal style='line-height:200%'><span class=GramE><span
style='font-family:"Times New Roman"'>and</span></span><span style='font-family:
"Times New Roman"'> http://pages.prodigy.net/groovyskye/2.html.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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